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Bright and Cheery Orange Sweater

Amazing Grace in dirge parade. A coffin carried with great esteem. Bright and cheery orange sweater, now enclosed, forever. She’s laid to rest in an open nest, enclosed in dour cement. Her body old, well truthfully dead, for age no longer matters. Arrives in heaven, composed. Her fingers no longer gnarled, out of her stingy wheelchair, fruitful hair, no need for a nurse or a nightlight. Out of the grave with a Hallelujah shout. Truth be told, saints don’t remain - She blinks, to her soul’s rest - in eternity. The truth, the whole truth revealed and relished in her Savior’s domain. The flesh you’ll find - her body’s in the ground. We, that live, must be able to dig up remains to be brought to the edge, to feel the loss. Lincoln’s son bared his dad - never a sound did the president breathe - dead bones, life’s rickety-rack can only be an act of God. Our faith in inhale, exhale, and lungs and heart. The Creator of all - life and death he owns. Her bright and cheery orange sweater, rosary twisted round her fingers in an open coffin, the loud outburst of grief from her son’s lips, are all the sights and sounds of lang syne poetry. 6/2/2022

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Date: 6/4/2022 4:52:00 PM
I loved the imagery and full descriptions in your poem, Kim. We go to a better place, the presence of God. Bless you, Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/4/2022 5:34:00 PM
Amen, Bill! Thanks!
Date: 6/3/2022 2:02:00 AM
She is in Heaven, free and happy, basking in God's love.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/3/2022 4:08:00 AM
Yes, she is. Thank you, sweet dear friend. <3
Date: 6/2/2022 5:54:00 PM
Amen, Kim. Love it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/2/2022 7:25:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 6/2/2022 3:10:00 PM
When we die we are back to our youthful skin and pain is shed away by the karma of God's love, I enjoyed your story poem Kim, very touching, I too love orange, its a color of life, and happiness, thank you for sharing this meaningful story. Its always the people who are left behind who suffer, not the ones who rise above :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/2/2022 7:26:00 PM
My one grandma loved black and white, the other the brighter colors. :) Thank you, dear one!
Date: 6/2/2022 8:43:00 AM
Wow. Very nice poem. Brilliant and beautiful. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/2/2022 9:21:00 AM
Thanks, Heidi!

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