Bright and Cheery Orange Sweater

Amazing Grace in dirge parade.
A coffin carried with great esteem.
Bright and cheery orange sweater,
now enclosed, forever. She’s laid

to rest in an open nest, enclosed
in dour cement. Her body old,
well truthfully dead, for age no longer
matters. Arrives in heaven, composed.

Her fingers no longer gnarled, out
of her stingy wheelchair, fruitful hair,
no need for a nurse or a nightlight.
Out of the grave with a Hallelujah shout.

Truth be told, saints don’t remain -
She blinks, to her soul’s rest - in eternity.
The truth, the whole truth revealed
and relished in her Savior’s domain.

The flesh you’ll find - her body’s in the ground.
We, that live, must be able to dig up remains
to be brought to the edge, to feel the loss.
Lincoln’s son bared his dad - never a sound

did the president breathe - dead bones,
life’s rickety-rack can only be an act of God.
Our faith in inhale, exhale, and lungs and heart.
The Creator of all - life and death he owns.

Her bright and cheery orange sweater, rosary
twisted round her fingers in an open coffin,
the loud outburst of grief from her son’s lips,
are all the sights and sounds of lang syne poetry.

6/2/2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Baker Avatar
June 4, 2022 at 4:52 PM
I loved the imagery and full descriptions in your poem, Kim. We go to a better place, the presence of God. Bless you, Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
June 4, 2022 at 5:34 PM
Amen, Bill! Thanks!
Buhagiar Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 2:02 AM
She is in Heaven, free and happy, basking in God's love.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 3, 2022 at 4:08 AM
Yes, she is. Thank you, sweet dear friend. <3
Watt Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 5:54 PM
Amen, Kim. Love it!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 7:25 PM
Thank you!
Rose  Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 3:10 PM
When we die we are back to our youthful skin and pain is shed away by the karma of God's love, I enjoyed your story poem Kim, very touching, I too love orange, its a color of life, and happiness, thank you for sharing this meaningful story. Its always the people who are left behind who suffer, not the ones who rise above :)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 7:26 PM
My one grandma loved black and white, the other the brighter colors. :) Thank you, dear one!
Sands Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 8:43 AM
Wow. Very nice poem. Brilliant and beautiful. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 2, 2022 at 9:21 AM
Thanks, Heidi!
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