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Bridled Heart

Listless, languid, bridled heart Saddled with yesterday's sorrows Shackling stirrups hold my feet in drowning quicksand Monotonous misery holds the reins of my fate Haltered by grief; lassoed by suffering Struggling as every bit of pain pulsates through my mind Each rope, each strand pulls tighter the yarns of pricked spirit Choked by the collar of despondency around my swollen glands The trail is spliced with calamitous lifemarks Fragile fronds of suffocating twine bind my steps Asphyxiating plumes of acid flood my wounded soul Dissonant chords warp senses; sounding melancholy chime Body recoils as oppressive memories torture my psche My restive thoughts are bound by the unforgiving chains of time Pending doom wraps it's coils around my inner being Smothering the promise of a brighter tomorrow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/6/2010 9:24:00 PM
One of the most powerful ones in the contest. VERY feeling! Congratulations.
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Date: 12/6/2010 1:02:00 PM
Congrats Stephen on your super win in John's contest with this brilliant write and entry ... enjoy another top ten win my friend with luv..
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Date: 12/6/2010 11:42:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's "Jaded Partitions" contest Stephen. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/6/2010 5:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.Sara
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Date: 12/6/2010 1:56:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Jared, Stephen
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Date: 11/29/2010 11:47:00 AM
very deep very pulling lines to the reader enjoyed sarah x
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Date: 11/29/2010 11:43:00 AM
May your week bring you good health,may your heart overflow with love, and may your life bring you amazing inspiration to continue your writing. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning and thank you for sharing it Stephen. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/29/2010 9:46:00 AM
wow,, a deep and sad write,, enjoyed reading,..p.d.
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Date: 11/29/2010 9:44:00 AM
A compelling description of one who struggles to overcome the pain of "yesterday's sorrows," Stephen. If this is for the "jaded love" contest, I'm sure it will do very well. I like the way you scatter bits of alliteration throughout the poem to enhance its flow. Great write! Blessings and love, Carolyn
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