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Bridges and Thinking

I bridged the gap Therefore I haven't fallen into the great crevasse Pretty good going... I'm happier unlost, not in a pit of despair Plus Strictly is on later I'm going to experiment with taco making, am halfways through knitting a pumpkin and just bought a book with promises of being funny... I haven't got up yet - but I'm totally going to I'll sneak a poem on the end... I can contemplate or I can become better I need to decide

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Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/30/2023 3:28:00 AM

i'd say this is really a haibun, or a hairbun as i call them..i always enjoy your quirky musings, it's like peeping through someone's windows nosy parkering at what they're up to lol btw i can't abide strictly, but i like dancing on ice :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/30/2023 5:13:00 AM

I shall keep an eye out for your poem - I used to go I've skating regularly as a teenager but apart from an occasional graceful fall - I just happily went round in circles whilst Chesney's One and Only played :) of course TV as a child had T&D on every other show ;)

Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 9/30/2023 4:40:00 AM

my mum and sister love strictly, i'm the odd one out (story of my life!) i used to skate years ago so that's probably why i enjoy watching it, plus i love torvill & dean, in fact i'm trying to write a poem based loosely around them :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/30/2023 3:46:00 AM

Thanks Charlotte - there's me thinking you and I would get along too lol - apart from Bez I've never quite appreciated Dancing on Ice (I'll relabel the form, thank you!) :)