Bridge To a Memory

Walks we took, across the bridge and down the ridge we'd climb
He'd catch himself to shorten steps, while I'd be stretching mine
With fields to plow, and milking cows, yet he always made the time
One look beyond the bridge of time, and childhood can rewind

Those summer days, soon passed away, yet love just lingers on
How simple all the world seemed then, unfurled beneath the sun
Together we would brew mischief, while chewing juicy gum
We'd talk about most anything, and walk till the daylight dimmed

I'd look to him, with questions, grand, then, he would give them thought
He'd scratch his head, and often said, "I'll answer the best that I can"
Then explain in words I understood, and knew that less was good
"How many stars are in the sky?" ..."Well, Sugar Pie,... a lot!!"

If I could choose a single day .....across the span of time...
Where the sun was gold, the stream was cold, the skies were bluer blue
A quiet place...his whiskered face, the grace he showed to me
We'd walk our pace, across the bridge, where greener grass would grow....


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A  Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 10:49 PM
Carrie ,a beautiful winning poem. Enjoyed reading every crossing bridge win. Hugs ~ SKAT ~
Bauer Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 10:04 AM
this is lovely, carrie! a very moving tribute to childhood and parenthood and a well-deserved win in the contest.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 8:06 AM
Sweet! Congrats.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 6:58 AM
Congratulations on your winning spot once more carrie xx
Britt Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 9:30 PM
7 - Carrie...I am taken in an utterly undone. I consider it a mark of a truthful, and well written poem when I am touched to tears. Your last stanza (the last four lines) unmanned me as I thought of Grandpa. ~CTB
Mehta Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 9:21 PM
Congrats on the win in the contest of Deb, Carrie
Posey Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 8:09 PM
I feel the tenderness of your words as they massage your memory and quicken remembrances. Beautifully written.... Love ya .... Jake
A   Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 6:44 PM
Carrie , Congratulations on your Crossing That Bridge win.... always & forever :) LINDA
Onclaud Avatar
November 6, 2013 at 11:01 AM
your tender piece bring luster to reveries, carrie... as always, a supreme read.. ... special cheers on your win..:) huggs
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 8:54 AM
I missed this one. You can see the images as you read. Day brightener for sure.
Brown Avatar
June 30, 2011 at 5:27 AM
A belated congratulations Carrie on your win in Brian Strand's "Let's See Poetry" contest. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
June 27, 2011 at 7:13 PM
congratulations, who could ever forget this one?
Johnson Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 7:40 AM
What a lovely memory this presents. Much better than its placement. Love, Joyce
Sweetheart Avatar
June 25, 2011 at 6:59 AM
Congrats Carrie on your HM in the contest with this dynamic entry superbly written my friend.. enjoy special honor luv..
Freeman Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 6:21 PM
Carrie, you never mentioned Grandpa one time in this free verse, but that's got to be your referral. Right or wrong? That accomplishing factor in itself deserves an award. Congratulations on your worthy poem s honor in sixth place. Agape, Moses
Puddifoot Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 12:44 PM
congrats on your win in the contest with this lovely nostalgic write, good use of internal rhyme...
Brown Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 11:14 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie in Debbie Guzzi's contest "The Rhyme Inside". Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 10:02 AM
I knew this would be a winner, Carrie. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 4:41 AM
Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest, Carrie
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 9:31 PM
ahhhh, this is simply awesome, Carrie. Another big fave for me. Congratulations on one of the best poems in this contest.
Mehta Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 9:18 PM
Carrie - Many Congrats on big win with this superb creative write. Luv & Best wishes-Hitendra Mehta
Mannan Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 8:54 PM
Carrie these are some awesome summer memories. Warm congrats for this win.
Gorelick Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 7:59 PM
YOu did a great job with the rhyme..congrats on your win. BG
Sweetheart Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 7:42 PM
Congrats Carrie on another glorious winning poem in Debbie's contest my friend..an excellent entry with superb rhyme sequence.. enjoy a great win with luv...
George   Avatar
March 28, 2011 at 6:46 PM
Oh! Carrie, this is just BEAUTIFUL. Carried me away to a better time and better place. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Lainie
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