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That slow and spectacular gait of a bride Brimming as she is with nuptial pride With grace and beauty each regal stride as invitees whisper, 'here comes the bride'. She for her big day so perfectly embellished Her love-match said to be divinely predestined. On their big day even the plain-faced, homely ones turn into comely beauties A magical day as it is, of rituals and formalities. All the fuss and pomp, she almost feels like a queen Her glamour thus showcased, with praise dön't be mean. Attired in any hue, rose-red or even snow-white She glows with an aura of pure holy sacred light. Many overawed by the debut of her bridal charm Yet, watch out O' newly weds for any evil eye's harm. For the pinnacle of her womanly splendour and beauty is now upon coveted passion's pedestal and apogee She on stage now with only love's trophy and token Just graduating from spinsterhood, to disappear the maiden! As the center of attention, she turns into an actress Her emotions under zoom lens, a bit easier to guess For close-ups she knows she has to impress. Some coy, some bashful, some hiding joy in the heart of hearts With cameras clicking, drums beating, her new life starts

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Date: 7/28/2023 5:18:00 AM
My friend, this is a very vividly descriptive poem. One covering such a joyful event in people's lives. A fav for me. God bless.
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Date: 5/31/2023 7:31:00 PM
S.Z., (say, what’s best to call you?) i really like this poem. You’ve well covered the subject & with lots of reality & truth. The flow is smooth & engaging. A very mmorable grouping of pics. Brought back memories of my own wedding. Now, tackle the grooms! Haha
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Date: 5/31/2023 6:37:00 PM
Wow Zaynab: A perfect description of brides. You really captured well the beauty and happiness of a bride on her wedding day. Well done. SuZ
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Date: 3/28/2023 2:41:00 PM
What beautiful lines in your poem, Zaynab! A charming description of a bride on her wedding day.
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Date: 3/28/2023 1:19:00 AM
Hi Zaynab, such a beautiful poem...describes a bride perfectly!
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/28/2023 3:05:00 AM
Warmest thanx for beautiful comment dear,
Date: 3/18/2023 3:20:00 PM
A beautiful poem of a bride's wedding day, loved every line… Belle
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/20/2023 12:55:00 PM
Warmest thanks for lovely comment.
Date: 3/14/2023 1:28:00 AM
A tribute, not only to the bride, but the system we call a wedding, the poetry superb, the rhyme very good...Harry
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/14/2023 6:08:00 AM
Thanks so much for your fine thoughts on this poem,
Date: 3/11/2023 12:36:00 PM
//////I'm Here! "Attired in any hue, rose-red or even snow-white She glows with an aura of pure holy sacred light." a beautiful couplet full of imagery, overall compelling Szynab!
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/11/2023 7:56:00 PM
Warmest thanks for your beautiful comment pointing out your fav lines. Take care,
Date: 3/11/2023 12:28:00 PM
A wonderful picture that you create in the splendor of love; a mystical day full of rites and ceremonies as it is. True indeed! I found myself enjoying both your observations and the metaphors they evoked.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/11/2023 7:55:00 PM
Thanks soo much poet for your wonderful review of my poem!
Date: 3/10/2023 3:45:00 AM
Good Morning. This is beautiful poetry in every way. Yes, her new life starts. It was a pleasure turning to your page and entry. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Have a wonderful day and weekend.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/10/2023 9:48:00 AM
Aw, my warmest thanks for your gracious acknowledgements. Take care you fine poetess yourself.
Date: 3/9/2023 7:48:00 PM
That is truly beautiful, a perfect description of the feelings and rituals of a bride on her wedding day… Belle
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/9/2023 8:17:00 PM
Warmest thanks for your wonderful feedback,
Date: 3/9/2023 9:37:00 AM
This is a masterpiece--vividly descriptive and delightful! Janice
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/9/2023 12:10:00 PM
Aw warm warm thanks for sweet nice compliment, you are a better poetess though.
Date: 3/9/2023 8:53:00 AM
Such a lovely written poem of the wedding day experience. Reading your poem had me feeling like I was there. What a beautiful way to spend a day, my friend. The imagery was excellent! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/9/2023 9:22:00 AM
Hii Bill, thanks soo much for your super comment, yeah it can take you back to wedding day.
Date: 3/9/2023 7:37:00 AM
A touching, beautifully narrated tale of a bride's first day of married life. :)
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/9/2023 9:21:00 AM
Warm warm thanks for your beautiful comment,
Date: 3/9/2023 6:41:00 AM
Nicely written, showcasing brides' pride. :)
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/9/2023 9:21:00 AM
Oh yes, warmest thanks for great feedback Linda, that owls so cute eh.
Date: 3/9/2023 5:47:00 AM
Lovely penning with nice rhyme and flow too.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/9/2023 9:20:00 AM
Thanks so much for nice feedback,
Date: 3/9/2023 4:59:00 AM
S. Zaynab, clever story of an age old celebrations. Paulette
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/9/2023 9:19:00 AM
Time old age old indeed, warm thanks for your eloquent comment,
Date: 3/9/2023 4:28:00 AM
Hello S.Zaynab, A bride wedding is her special day. ll eyes are on her. She is excitd and nervous at the same time. The groom is nervous to. When they are wed the tension is eased. Hugs./Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/9/2023 2:34:00 PM
Hello S. Zaynab, yes it is true. You are welcome. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/9/2023 9:19:00 AM
True and well put, warmest thanks for your lovely thoughts adding nicely to my poem.
Date: 3/9/2023 2:45:00 AM
it doesn't sound like a match made in heaven here, when its real, the drum beats the fan fare is not needed only love, you told the story very well :)
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/9/2023 9:18:00 AM
Yeah love is always there and to celebrate it we use drums and fanfare, maybe in other cultures they have other songs and music. Warm thanks for fine comment,
Date: 3/9/2023 2:12:00 AM
What a beautiful poem. Described her day wonderfully. Have a great day!
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/9/2023 2:26:00 AM
Warmest thanks for that apt great comment,
Date: 3/9/2023 2:08:00 AM
You've captured so many elements for the bride on their wedding day, good work
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/9/2023 2:25:00 AM
Warm thanks for the great feedback,
Date: 3/8/2023 6:46:00 PM
You paint such beautiful images with your words. Every bride does feel like a queen on her wedding day. Your thoughts bring a smile to my heart. My best to you. :) Brandy
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/9/2023 2:24:00 AM
Warmest thanks for a lovely fab comment!
Date: 3/8/2023 7:04:00 AM
A beautiful portrait you paint in glory of love--A magical day as it is, of rituals and formalities. True indeed! Much enjoyed your descriptions and images you brought forth.
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/9/2023 2:24:00 AM
Thanks soo much for that super comment poet!
Date: 3/8/2023 6:45:00 AM
- A bride should feel like a princess on this special day... a lovely poem, S.zaynab -
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S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri
Date: 3/9/2023 2:23:00 AM
Yes very true, warmest thanks for beautiful comment.

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