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Brenda's Beguiling Boatman

Beautiful Brenda was bewitched by a man she created in her novel,
Blissfully absorbed in her imagination with this man she marveled.
Boats and the sea were his lifelong passions.
Besotted with the ocean, it sparked supreme satisfaction.

Beguiled with this boater, Dan, the author had imagined,
Brenda futilely fantasized about this blue-eyed man with abandon.
By chance, she was invited on a cocktail cruise with some friends.
Brenda decided she needed a break from her passionless pretend.

Blustery and brilliant, the day azurely arrived.
Brenda was unaware a blind date had been craftily contrived.
Befuddled at first she met this new man called Ben.
Blushing and irresistible, the inevitable dance began.

Ben was uncannily alike the magnificent man in her book,
Brawny, with a sensational smile that required a second look.
Ben was the boat owner, and loved the seductive sea like Dan.
But he was not imaginary, and the romance took off and ran!






9/10/16
Written for "Brenda" Contest
Sponsor: Julia Ward
Awarded 1st Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Haight Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 4:09 PM
Well written, Brenda, great alliteration and a happy ending! I enjoyed your story and congratulations on your 1st place win! Hugs, Sandra
Mcgrath Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 4:11 PM
Thank you so much Sandra!
Mcgrath Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 4:09 PM
Thank you Wayne! :)
Poteet Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 12:19 PM
Congratulations, Brenda, what could be more fitting. Fine storyline for the prompt, Julia gave us.
Mcgrath Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 12:34 PM
Thank you Reason A. Poteet. The prompt was challenging with the alliteration requirements, and the storyline was fun.
Godwin Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 10:21 AM
I enjoyed your B-B-B-Brenda and congratulate you. All the best ... CayCay
Mcgrath Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 10:44 AM
Thank you CayCay!
Scars Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 8:30 AM
wow Brenda! love this it's so cute and clever and amazing lady :) congrats on your placement :)-luloo
Mcgrath Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 8:44 AM
Thank you Laura. The win is extra special since my name is Brenda. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 7:10 AM
Cute story! Congrats!
Mcgrath Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 8:26 AM
Thank you Kim! :)
Roper Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 1:03 AM
Very good Brenda, well deserved win :-)
Mcgrath Avatar
October 11, 2016 at 6:50 AM
Thank you Eve! :)
DiMino Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 6:34 PM
Very nicely done! I love happy endings!
Mcgrath Avatar
September 11, 2016 at 6:57 PM
Thank you Joe, so do I! I should look for a boatman for myself. :)
Mcgrath Avatar
September 10, 2016 at 7:25 PM
Written for the contest "Brenda" 9/10/16
Ward Avatar
June 11, 2017 at 3:00 PM
My congratulations have disappeared from view! Here they are again... Well done for your win in my contest, Brenda.
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