Valsa George Poet Pantoum

Breezy Autumn

Hot summer is quickly fading away
One can feel November’s chilly breeze
Verdant green, replaced by sparkling shades
Earth gets dressed in colorful splendor
 
One can feel November’s chilly breeze
When autumn days start to unfold
Earth gets dressed in colorful splendor
Changes occur giving the eyes great delight
 
When autumn days start to unfold
The birds around the lake are flying away
Changes occur giving the eyes great delight
The maple turns yellow, red and ochre
 
The birds around the lake are flying away
Leaves get dyed in multi shades
The maple turns yellow, red and ochre
Cool wind blows and air becomes chilly
 
Leaves get dyed in multi shades
One can feel November’s chilly breeze
Cool wind blows and air becomes chilly.
Hot summer is quickly fading away.

Sept.5. 2022

Autumn Pantoum Poetry Contest
Sponsor- Caren Krutsinger

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Sara Kendrick February 21, 2025 at 6:27 AM I enjoyed this contest entry. Very creative pantoum which are not so easy to write but yours seemed seamless. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K

Bill Baker September 11, 2022 at 9:23 AM A colorful Pantoum for this Autumn contest. The imagery was lovely, Valsa. Good luck in the contest my dear friend. Bill

Suzanne Delaney September 11, 2022 at 4:21 AM Hi Valsa: I love Autumn poems and this is a shining example. Beautiful Pantoum. Hugs, SuZ

Sotto Poet September 6, 2022 at 5:37 AM Valsa, the fall season brings such lovely views and noises. I really liked the gorgeous pantoum you wrote and the charming colors it had. Excellent use of imagery. Best for a win.

Bj Legros Kelley September 5, 2022 at 6:46 PM Lovely Valsa! I have been gone from the soup all summer and it is wonderful to be back on here today and read your wonderful poem! It is exciting, I live in a hot desert region, so I am so thankful for the coming autumn season <3 This poem lifts me up so much, God bless you my friend :) <3

Rico Leffanta September 5, 2022 at 11:08 AM Whip over to Australia, and you can enjoy Spring! Aloha!

Victor Buhagiar September 5, 2022 at 9:14 AM Lovely pantoum. Great imagery. I have another Autumn pantoum but not for any contest. Best for a win.

Vijay Pandit September 5, 2022 at 8:11 AM Beautiful sights and sounds of autumn, Valsa. Enjoyed the charming hues you convey. Best to you.