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Breezy Autumn

Hot summer is quickly fading away One can feel November’s chilly breeze Verdant green, replaced by sparkling shades Earth gets dressed in colorful splendor One can feel November’s chilly breeze When autumn days start to unfold Earth gets dressed in colorful splendor Changes occur giving the eyes great delight When autumn days start to unfold The birds around the lake are flying away Changes occur giving the eyes great delight The maple turns yellow, red and ochre The birds around the lake are flying away Leaves get dyed in multi shades The maple turns yellow, red and ochre Cool wind blows and air becomes chilly Leaves get dyed in multi shades One can feel November’s chilly breeze Cool wind blows and air becomes chilly. Hot summer is quickly fading away. Sept.5. 2022 Autumn Pantoum Poetry Contest Sponsor- Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 9/11/2022 9:23:00 AM
A colorful Pantoum for this Autumn contest. The imagery was lovely, Valsa. Good luck in the contest my dear friend. Bill
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Date: 9/11/2022 4:21:00 AM
Hi Valsa: I love Autumn poems and this is a shining example. Beautiful Pantoum. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 9/6/2022 5:37:00 AM
Valsa, the fall season brings such lovely views and noises. I really liked the gorgeous pantoum you wrote and the charming colors it had. Excellent use of imagery. Best for a win.
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Date: 9/5/2022 6:46:00 PM
Lovely Valsa! I have been gone from the soup all summer and it is wonderful to be back on here today and read your wonderful poem! It is exciting, I live in a hot desert region, so I am so thankful for the coming autumn season <3 This poem lifts me up so much, God bless you my friend :) <3
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Date: 9/5/2022 11:08:00 AM
Whip over to Australia, and you can enjoy Spring! Aloha!
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Date: 9/5/2022 9:14:00 AM
Lovely pantoum. Great imagery. I have another Autumn pantoum but not for any contest. Best for a win.
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Date: 9/5/2022 8:11:00 AM
Beautiful sights and sounds of autumn, Valsa. Enjoyed the charming hues you convey. Best to you.
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