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               Breathtaking, because

 

                                                       . . . The sunset, in its sweet surrender,

                   with elegant poise; kisses the horizon slow and tender

                                   Beauty is definitely defined,

        through majestic moments entwined

 

                                          yet, without you

                                             here with me

 

                             To embrace time and space,

            my world does not feel . . .    Breathtaking, because

 

        

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~ Lingering thoughts from the heart ~

        Because you are a part of me

 

Breathtaking, Because

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 Breathtaking, because


                                                       . . . The sunset, in its sweet surrender,

                   with elegant poise; kisses the horizon slow and tender

                                   Beauty is definitely defined,

        through majestic moments entwined


                                          yet, without you

                                             here with me


                             To embrace time and space,

            my world does not feel . . .    Breathtaking, because


        

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~ Lingering thoughts from the heart ~

        Because you are a part of me

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Paige Hind June 14, 2023 at 3:07 PM Amazing! I love to read your work! Brandy Nicole June 14, 2023 at 7:06 PM Thank you, Paige. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Fin Chuuk January 31, 2023 at 1:08 PM This is breathtaking in itself… I think your poems should be in Hallmark greeting cards. That’s if you don’t have them out there already beside Soup. STUNNING! Brandy Nicole January 31, 2023 at 7:05 PM Oh, my ! Such a wonderful thing to say, Fin. I appreciate your lovely comment and the beautiful compliment. That would be nice, having my poems on a Hallmark greeting card. (Anything is possible). Thank you for your kind words. My heart is smiling. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jared Pickett January 21, 2023 at 12:58 AM I like how you transitioned from the beauty, tranquility of sunset to how its beauty is lost because your not with your person. That's at least what I'm reading..:-) Much love Asavvy1 Brandy Nicole January 21, 2023 at 2:37 PM You're absolutely correct. That's the exact emotion that tangles within. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. Thank you, Jared. My best to you. :) Brandy

John Loving Iii April 28, 2022 at 5:40 PM Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Could I show you mountians you've never seen. Or share a sunset an evening scene. standing still the moment in time, something we shared with our eyes. Brandy Nicole April 29, 2022 at 11:20 AM Yes, I completely agree. "Beauty is in the eye of the beholder." Your comment is so loving and tender, soft and romantic. Such a wonderful thing to say. My heart is smiling. Thank you, John. My best to you. :) Brandy

Bill Baker March 6, 2022 at 8:00 AM Breathtaking poem, Bandy. Experiencing the oneness of ourselves and nature is exhilarating. Loved your poem. I've read this before, but didn't see a comment from me? Well, there's one now; with a big ol' Texas bear hug to boot, Bill Brandy Nicole March 7, 2022 at 7:10 PM Being one with nature is a wonderful feeling indeed. Sharing such a moment with someone special, well, that is "breathtaking." Thank you Bill, for the lovely comment and for the bear hug. My heart is smiling. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Debra L Brown February 20, 2022 at 2:09 PM Beautifully penned Brandy..Blessing ~ Debra Brandy Nicole February 20, 2022 at 6:46 PM Thank you, Debra. Your kind words bring a smile to my heart. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Connie Marcum Wong December 22, 2021 at 2:45 PM This is mood shifting poetry Brandy. It is beautiful and romantic. Blessings xxoo Brandy Nicole December 22, 2021 at 8:23 PM Such a beautiful thing to say. Thank you, Connie. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Mike Gentile December 11, 2021 at 6:09 AM This is just stunning Brandy!! Brandy Nicole December 11, 2021 at 7:39 PM Thank you, Mike. And the longing within continues to linger. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy

Victor Buhagiar November 29, 2021 at 3:42 AM Your romantic scribblers and photo touch my heart. Hugs. Brandy Nicole November 29, 2021 at 10:05 AM Romance should always touch the heart. Thank you, Victor. You and your thoughts are appreciated. I think the photo IS breathtaking. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Joanna Daniel November 29, 2021 at 2:03 AM Breathtaking writing with deep meaning found in between the lines, Brandy:) Brandy Nicole November 29, 2021 at 9:58 AM Thank you, Jo. Within these lines there is a deep meaning with a beautiful longing. I appreciate you and your kind words. :) Brandy

Malabika Ray Choudhury November 27, 2021 at 8:09 AM Dear Brandy, such a lovely piece! Your poem is as breathtaking as your surrounding..but nothing feels right without someone in your heart. Love and hugs ~ Mala Brandy Nicole November 27, 2021 at 8:10 PM Everything makes sense, when love embraces the heart. In such a wonderful way. So beautiful and poetic. Thank you, Malabika. Your thoughts are so tender. I appreciate you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Valsa George November 25, 2021 at 10:36 PM A magnificent day with all beauty around, still something is missing and through your lovely lines, you make us feel the vacuum! Beautiful, Brandy Brandy Nicole November 26, 2021 at 8:30 PM I have never thought about my poetry in this way, Valsa. "Like a Vacuum" It makes sense. You and your thoughts are greatly appreciated. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Anitha Jayasankar November 25, 2021 at 12:26 AM Dear Brandy, just came here to see if you had written any new beautiful poem... Hope you are fine my friend... Wishing you and yours a very happy Thanksgiving... Hugs... ~ Ani Brandy Nicole November 25, 2021 at 5:44 PM Dear Anitha, it has been a while since I have posted a new poem. I am doing well. There is a balance between life and recreation. Thank you for being so kind and caring. Happy Thanksgiving to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Heidi Sands November 10, 2021 at 5:17 AM Beautiful Brandy. You write very nice poems :) Brandy Nicole November 10, 2021 at 5:09 PM You are so kind. Thank you, Heidi. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos November 9, 2021 at 10:32 AM Brandy, your scribbles I just love, you engage your reader with your enormous capacity to love and be loved. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Brandy Nicole November 9, 2021 at 7:54 PM Thank you, Jennifer. Love is a beautiful emotion, one that leaves you floating beyond the clouds. Many wonderful blessings to you. Your kind words are greatly appreciated. :) Hugs, Brandy

Janice Canerdy November 8, 2021 at 9:02 AM Your "little scribble" is a really lovely poem--great use of personification, Brandy Nicole! Janice Brandy Nicole November 8, 2021 at 9:13 PM So sweet of you to say. Thank you, Janice. You and your thoughts are appreciated. My best to you. :) Brandy

Gordon Mcconnell November 2, 2021 at 2:18 PM Brill phrasing and superb imagery Brandy, this shows you at the moment so tender and looking with real hope. Blessings, Gordon Brandy Nicole November 2, 2021 at 8:22 PM Such a wonderful thing to say. There is always hope. Thank you, Gordon. My best to you. :) Brandy

Regina Mcintosh November 1, 2021 at 10:59 PM Lovely write. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina Brandy Nicole November 2, 2021 at 7:32 PM You and your kind words are appreciated, Regina. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear sweet friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Andrea Dietrich November 1, 2021 at 12:13 PM just a little "amazing" scribble!!! Love this, Brandy Brandy Nicole November 1, 2021 at 5:11 PM Awe, you are so sweet. :) Hugs to you, Andrea. Thank you for your lovely comment. :) Brandy

Gershon Wolf October 30, 2021 at 6:31 PM A sensitive, sensuous tribute to shared experience, Brandy. Without it, even a magnificent sunset 'goes to waste.' Kudos, Gershon Brandy Nicole October 31, 2021 at 1:10 PM Yes, this is filled with so many emotions. A sweet ache and a tender longing. Even a touch of sensuality. You are exactly right, Gershon. Without that special, watching a sunset can leave a heart feeling lost. I appreciate you and your thoughts. My best to you. :) Brandy

Constance La France October 26, 2021 at 2:43 PM Brandy, wow, I really like your poem and your presentation is amazing, excellent ~ love and serenity _Constance Brandy Nicole October 27, 2021 at 4:46 PM Awe, thank you Constance. Such a wonderful thing to say. Your lovely comment is appreciated. Thank you, my dear sweet friend. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Susan Ashley October 21, 2021 at 7:24 PM Dearest Brandy, it's been a while since I've lost myself in the breathtaking beauty of your poetry. This piece is sumptuous. Such tender romantic yearning stirs my heart's imagination in the most dreamy and wistful way. The blend of emotions is exquisite and your luscious pen is ever so alluring. Warmest wishes, sweet poetess.. ~Susan Brandy Nicole October 22, 2021 at 8:40 PM Dearest Susan, my heart smiles whenever I receive a comment from you. Your thoughts are always so beautiful and poetic. (You are an amazing woman and poetess). I am in complete awe with your praise. *Softly blushing* You truly humble me with all your kind words and compliments about my poetry. Thank you, my dear sweet friend. I appreciate you and your friendship. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Watt October 21, 2021 at 4:12 PM Brandy, what an image... the sunset with elegant poise; kisses the horizon slow and tender. Romantic but bittersweet because you cannot share the moment with the one you love. I like the effect of placing "Breathtaking, because" as bookends at beginning and end. Another masterful poetic gem from your pen that pleases the eye and touches the soul... going in my faves. Blessings, dear friend Brandy Nicole October 22, 2021 at 7:08 PM John, there is something magical, yet breathtaking about the sun slowly kissing the sky. Sharing such a moment with the one you love, makes it even more enchanting- beautiful and exciting. A sweet ache lingers within, a tender longing. "Breathtaking, because.. " belongs at the beginning and at the end, to tie all the emotions together. Thank you for noticing and for the lovely comment. I appreciate you placing this in your favorites as well. Many wonderful blessings to you, my dear friend. :) Hugs, Brandy

Harry Horsman October 20, 2021 at 6:28 AM LOve your little scribble Brandy, and the depth of lost and love, and the amazing scene you share with the reader. Brandy Nicole October 20, 2021 at 6:50 PM This scribble is about feeling complete, yet lost all at the same time. Harry, you and your thoughts are always appreciated. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Running Wolves October 18, 2021 at 3:55 PM Oh my such a sad longing can be felt in this lovely poem Brandy Nicole October 18, 2021 at 5:30 PM Hi Robert, there is a tender longing within. A sweet ache that curls softly around the heart. I appreciate you reading this little scribble of mine. ~ Brandy

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