Susan Gentry Poet Acrostic

Breathtaking

Beguiling, appealing... building 
Ripe for nibbling, sucking... controlling
Each breath, gasp... ordering inner core
Answer, body obeying... heat climbing from
Tormenting, teasing... bringing to unbearable 
Heights... anticipating the low whimper
Touching moistness... watching eyes that
Ask, beg, command more... moaning lips
Kiss, hardness seeking... sliding 
Incites, stretching, throbbing... intense rhythm
Nothing held back, giving... breathlessly
Giving, releasing all... to each other

Written 3-9-2016

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James Inman August 6, 2016 at 1:11 PM Intense! Very sensual, Susan. Susan Gentry March 20, 2018 at 7:44 AM Thanks for reading and commenting.

Viv Wigley July 13, 2016 at 12:13 AM I'm just going for a cold shower, Susan. Hot stuff, well writ. Viv x Susan Gentry March 20, 2018 at 7:42 AM Thanks Viv.

Daniel Turner July 1, 2016 at 8:10 AM Remember, sex is like a Chinese dinner, it ain't over until both of you get your cookie. Love it just as much the second time around Susan. Susan Gentry March 20, 2018 at 7:41 AM Lol. Thanks. Appreciate you.

Anne-Lise Andresen July 1, 2016 at 5:47 AM - Lovely written, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Susan Gentry March 20, 2018 at 7:41 AM Thank you!

Anthony Mark July 1, 2016 at 12:56 AM This was great first time round, and hasn't failed this time either, well done Susan.....Ian Susan Gentry March 20, 2018 at 7:39 AM Thanks Ian! You have been a big help with your input and encouragement.

Eileen Manassian July 1, 2016 at 12:53 AM Wow....lovely depiction of that bonding of two bodies into one. I enjoyed it. Great write...not easy to do in acrostic form. Susan Gentry March 20, 2018 at 7:38 AM Thank you!