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Breathtaking

Beguiling, appealing... building 
Ripe for nibbling, sucking... controlling
Each breath, gasp... ordering inner core
Answer, body obeying... heat climbing from
Tormenting, teasing... bringing to unbearable 
Heights... anticipating the low whimper
Touching moistness... watching eyes that
Ask, beg, command more... moaning lips
Kiss, hardness seeking... sliding 
Incites, stretching, throbbing... intense rhythm
Nothing held back, giving... breathlessly
Giving, releasing all... to each other

Written 3-9-2016

Copyright © Susan Gentry | Year Posted 2016

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James Inman Date: 8/6/2016 1:11:00 PM Intense! Very sensual, Susan. Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 3/20/2018 7:44:00 AM Thanks for reading and commenting.

Viv Wigley Date: 7/13/2016 12:13:00 AM I'm just going for a cold shower, Susan. Hot stuff, well writ. Viv x Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 3/20/2018 7:42:00 AM Thanks Viv.

Daniel Turner Date: 7/1/2016 8:10:00 AM Remember, sex is like a Chinese dinner, it ain't over until both of you get your cookie. Love it just as much the second time around Susan. Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 3/20/2018 7:41:00 AM Lol. Thanks. Appreciate you.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/1/2016 5:47:00 AM - Lovely written, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 3/20/2018 7:41:00 AM Thank you!

Anthony Mark Date: 7/1/2016 12:56:00 AM This was great first time round, and hasn't failed this time either, well done Susan.....Ian Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 3/20/2018 7:39:00 AM Thanks Ian! You have been a big help with your input and encouragement.

Eileen Manassian Date: 7/1/2016 12:53:00 AM Wow....lovely depiction of that bonding of two bodies into one. I enjoyed it. Great write...not easy to do in acrostic form. Login to Reply Susan Gentry Date: 3/20/2018 7:38:00 AM Thank you!