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Breathtaking

Beguiling, appealing... building Ripe for nibbling, sucking... controlling Each breath, gasp... ordering inner core Answer, body obeying... heat climbing from Tormenting, teasing... bringing to unbearable Heights... anticipating the low whimper Touching moistness... watching eyes that Ask, beg, command more... moaning lips Kiss, hardness seeking... sliding Incites, stretching, throbbing... intense rhythm Nothing held back, giving... breathlessly Giving, releasing all... to each other Written 3-9-2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/6/2016 1:11:00 PM
Intense! Very sensual, Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 3/20/2018 7:44:00 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 7/13/2016 12:13:00 AM
I'm just going for a cold shower, Susan. Hot stuff, well writ. Viv x
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Susan Gentry
Date: 3/20/2018 7:42:00 AM
Thanks Viv.
Date: 7/1/2016 8:10:00 AM
Remember, sex is like a Chinese dinner, it ain't over until both of you get your cookie. Love it just as much the second time around Susan.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 3/20/2018 7:41:00 AM
Lol. Thanks. Appreciate you.
Date: 7/1/2016 5:47:00 AM
- Lovely written, Susan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Susan Gentry
Date: 3/20/2018 7:41:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 7/1/2016 12:56:00 AM
This was great first time round, and hasn't failed this time either, well done Susan.....Ian
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Susan Gentry
Date: 3/20/2018 7:39:00 AM
Thanks Ian! You have been a big help with your input and encouragement.
Date: 7/1/2016 12:53:00 AM
Wow....lovely depiction of that bonding of two bodies into one. I enjoyed it. Great write...not easy to do in acrostic form.
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Susan Gentry
Date: 3/20/2018 7:38:00 AM
Thank you!

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