Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Free verse

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05.06.2026

Anne-Lise Andresen
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Breathless Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

1st place in the contest

- Breathless -

  It's not always the big things in life that leave the deepest glow... / quote by poet

  Live slowly
  Feel the feather silk breeze
      Find your inner compass with
  symmetry, harmony
  atmosphere and charisma
  Relish what is humble and insignificant
        The body is a sensitive instrument

  Time and inner peace
  The beauty of nature touches us
    Some moments you realize that coming,
    while others just come
         Quite indescribable right in front of me-
         a magnificent deer, huge antlers that shone
         in the morning sun
  A magical moment that left me breathless
      I count my blessings

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Paige Hind July 2, 2026 at 12:18 AM it would me too

Phyllis Babcock June 26, 2026 at 12:17 PM Every so often God gives us a beautiful picture so rare that we stand in awe of the beauty before us. So well said. love phyl

Dorothy Gibbons June 17, 2026 at 11:59 AM Beautiful poem Ann- Lise and breathtaking picture. A true winner Congratulations. I love deer .I'm Scottish but live in a breathtaking village in lake district of England. A young deer stopped infront of my sons car what a glorious sight . Also congratulations in world cup I stayed up to watch Norway win their 1st game <3

Karen Jones June 12, 2026 at 1:52 AM Omg I see why you won! That wonderful quote started the poem at a high bar! Congratulations

Krishnanand Guptar June 11, 2026 at 8:13 AM Congratulations dear poetess on shahing the top podium with a lovely poem on simplicity in life and its skilful illustration by enjoying the beauty in nature, which is multifarious, free, soothing, and enriching to the mind, the spirit and the soul, procuring peace, quietude and bliss..... Wishing you a blissful day.

sara Etgen-Baker June 10, 2026 at 3:02 PM just wow! Definitely worthy of the win. I can relate to the last two lines when I'm out in nature. hugs, Sara

Paula Goldsmith June 10, 2026 at 2:48 PM Congratulations on your win. Your "Breathless" is a lovely write with a great picture/quote. I love all 3. Hugs... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............

Tom Cunningham June 10, 2026 at 1:23 PM Back to wish you congratulations on your win Anne-Lise. Hope your week is going well. Tom

Sotto Poet June 10, 2026 at 10:51 AM Congratulations on your win in the contest with your beautifully crafted poem, Anne-Lise

Alison A Smith June 9, 2026 at 7:41 PM Your imagery left me breathless. Congratulations on your contest win.

Constance La France June 9, 2026 at 3:01 PM Anne-Lise, congratulations on your win in my Breathless contest with your beautifully penned poem, I love your quote and image~

Valsa George June 8, 2026 at 9:44 PM We needn't invest in great things to receive joy. Simple things from unexpected corners can thrill and astonish us, often leaving us breathless. Beautiful poem, brief and sweet. All the best dear Anne. Hugs,

Sotto Poet June 8, 2026 at 7:56 AM Unexpected moments seem to leave you breathless. Nothing beats nature. Anne-Lise, we may enjoy the thrills without contributing.

Sara Kendrick June 7, 2026 at 4:43 PM Yes, the deer in the picture is a beauty as is the sunrise upon that glorious day. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us which reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K.

Kim Rodrigues June 7, 2026 at 1:37 PM Beautifully said, dear friend! Oh, how many wonderful moments, precious and simple are missed! Hugs

Joanna Daniel June 6, 2026 at 6:27 AM So well said, Anne-lise:) great advice to live by:)

Joseph P. DiMino June 6, 2026 at 5:45 AM "Relish what is humble and insignificant The body is a sensitive instrument" -- profoundly beautiful. "A magical moment that left me breathless I count my blessings" -- a good habit to get into, though the blessings are countless. Great writing my friend. Have a wonderful weekend.

Tom Cunningham June 5, 2026 at 10:55 PM Nothing beats nature Anne-Lise, the wonders of it are for us to enjoy and the best of it there's no charge. Enjoy your weekend. Tom

David Crandall June 5, 2026 at 3:00 PM it seems like the moments that catch you by surprise are the ones that leave you breathless, like a beautiful deer!

Frederic Parker June 5, 2026 at 2:18 PM Your soul is tied to nature Anne, your poem expresses it well...Loved this

Heidi Sands June 5, 2026 at 2:11 PM I love this. So nice and truly a blessing :)

Beryl Edmonds June 5, 2026 at 12:51 PM That’s lovely Anne-Lise, poem and quote… Beryl