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Breathing Death

Slowly they come breathing death upon the warmth of sunrise, clouds - fear’s oily, ominous clouds. Cowering beneath a threadbare dawn each breath a life’s challenge exhaled in a muted defiance. Billowy doubts asking their questions obscuring the light of reason self imposed blindness seeking vision lost in suffocation’s breathing death. ©3/11/2018 submitted to – 10 Lines 5 words – Poetry Contest sponsor – Laura Loo

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