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At my mother's hospital deathbed, w a i t i n g for her final gasp; breathing death with unfathomable dread, tasting it- with each rasp. Praying for mother's ETERNAL rest. To lips a kiss pressed, c o n n e c t e d only by a thread; her spirit tight I grasp. Silently, death comes sighing- DEAD; I whisper love and unclasp . . . __________________________ March 5, 2018 Poetry/Rhyme/ Breathing Death Copyright Protected, ID 18-1001-388-01 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, 10 Lines, 5 Words III sponsor, Laura Loo First Place*

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Date: 3/30/2018 4:40:00 AM
Blessings and sincere congratulations on your fine win, Constance - all the best to you, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 3/27/2018 8:45:00 AM
Powerful. Congrats on your well deserved top win, BW.
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Date: 3/21/2018 8:22:00 PM
So powerful and sad...I'm sure you'll never forget that moment in a lifetime...Congrats on your top win, Constance!
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Date: 3/21/2018 7:44:00 AM
A mindful moment of time. Like Silent says one we all will face one day. Congrats on your well deserved top win!
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Date: 3/21/2018 7:42:00 AM
Sad but a fact of life, nicely penned Constance, congratulations on your first place... Mick
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Date: 3/21/2018 5:54:00 AM
beautiful poem, as always sweetest lady :) thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 3/5/2018 1:23:00 PM
Heartbreaking write and a place we will all be at some stage of our lives..
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Constance La France
Date: 3/6/2018 9:30:00 PM
Silent, thank you for visiting, yes, heartbreaking but part of living is the dying too ~

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