Breathing

Breathing in and breathing out Mechanical Physical Rhythmic Impossible to get wrong Mirrors Waves Motion No requirement to think Subconscious Automatic Controlled Show me how to breath Hand Held Heart Calm my fears Sync Each Breath Soothe my soul Inhale Exhale Faith B--Forms And Words Poetry Contest 2nd March 2023 Sponsored by: Sotto Poet

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Hat Bueckert

Date: 4/4/2023 8:33:00 AM

I like the format of this, was breathing in rhythm with the write. Nicely done and congrats :)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/4/2023 8:43:00 AM

Thanks Hat, you might like my non placer 'the clearing' then - I was soothed just writing it!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/3/2023 2:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative write. I really enjoyed it. Enjoy your win with blessings................

Sotto Poet

Date: 4/2/2023 11:16:00 AM

Dilly, congratulations on your well-deserved win. Your poem is fantastic; it appears that every word is Poetically written with great rhythm.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/2/2023 11:22:00 AM

Thank you for the placement and kind feedback

Paul Willason

Date: 3/2/2023 3:49:00 PM

Love the hypnotic rhythm and the well placed H alliteration...good one. Paul

Di11y Da11y
Date: 3/2/2023 10:58:00 PM

Thank you Paul. I'm not sure if I've achieved the blank verse requirement for the contest, but it's fun to see what transpires when you try a new form. Thanks for taking the time to comment, much appreciated:)