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Breath of a Poem

This sentence in my mind was golden lined. But it just didn't fit in with the burlap script. It begged me for days to leave it in place. Finally, I killed it to release the poem from its egg.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/21/2018 11:02:00 PM
beautiful title...wonderful verse...lol
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Date: 12/21/2018 8:52:00 PM
ah, I have been there, done that, and gotten the T-shirt. Sometimes, believe it or not, it re-surfaces,in a better place, in a different way, and when you resurrect it the second time it works beautifully.
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