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Breath of a Breakthrough

Pains and sweat, the body is in need of a scratch in failure’s holocaust, victimized in its catch nearly giving up all and beg then comes the matured egg after much trials is the long awaited hatch.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/6/2016 11:56:00 PM
Funom, enjoying your poems , this late evening ...linda
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/11/2016 8:34:00 AM
Thank you very much Lindy
Date: 2/6/2016 3:22:00 PM
Hi Funom, a limerick from your pen. One can picture this scene so well through your words. We sit awaiting the moment and then it does come and as Anne- Lise does say, everything will be fine. Really enjoyed this write my friend. A seven for this hatching my Friend....Vladislav
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/11/2016 8:35:00 AM
wooow! Thank you so much Vlada
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/11/2016 8:35:00 AM
I dont mind sending you my Novel for you to read
Date: 2/6/2016 1:26:00 PM
........... and everything will be fine :) - Great poem, Funom - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/11/2016 8:36:00 AM
Thank you very much Anne

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