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Breakup - Pining For Empty

The sun shines briefly then disappears Taking my mood with it Breadcrumbs of hope dissipate as hours tick by disappointment kicks in again I want to be excited about something Not always fighting to survive I will only tolerate the burn for so long Before I put out the flame

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Beata Agustin

Date: 6/15/2024 5:44:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.