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Breakthrough

Swirls of light streak across the gray sky The sun tries to make a breakthrough Like a striking thought in mind Ready for an action A revelation To the surface Is released From the Soul Heidi Sands 3/30/18

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 4/3/2018 9:08:00 AM

I like this very much - the first line is so evocative! Have a good day, Heidi-

Heidi Sands
Date: 4/3/2018 9:14:00 AM

Thank you Michelle! I hope you have a good day too :)

Joseph May

Date: 3/31/2018 5:32:00 PM

Nicely expressed Heidi..

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/31/2018 5:37:00 PM

Thank you so much Joseph :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/31/2018 4:01:00 AM

Captivating and inspiring dear, Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/31/2018 4:07:00 AM

Thank you so much Demetrios :)

Eve Roper

Date: 3/30/2018 10:05:00 PM

Nicely done, Heidi. Have a wonderful Easter Hugs Eve

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/31/2018 3:48:00 AM

Thank you Eve. Happy Easter :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/30/2018 5:00:00 PM

Beautiful imagery breaks through your words..a well written poem!

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/30/2018 5:02:00 PM

Thanks so much Vijay. Your comments always appreciated :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 3/30/2018 1:54:00 PM

Beautiful Heidi, I've not tried this form yet. it is lovely xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/30/2018 2:41:00 PM

Thank you Mike. It would be nice to see you try this form. You are a great writer. I enjoy your poetry :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/30/2018 11:19:00 AM

Out of the darkness comes light, haven't seen this form before Heidi, there's so many it's hard to keep up lol. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/30/2018 11:21:00 AM

Yes, here comes the light. And yes, there are certainly many different forms. Thank you for your visit :)

Supraja Kannan

Date: 3/30/2018 11:09:00 AM

Beautifully written Heidi... Lovely nonet, nice theme... I loved it...

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/30/2018 11:14:00 AM

Thank you Supraja. I am happy you loved it :)

Jan Allison

Date: 3/30/2018 11:03:00 AM

a lovely descriptive nonet Heidi, I've written one today and will post it tomorrow and mine is also written about the sky! :-) hugs jan xx

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/30/2018 11:14:00 AM

Thank you Jan. Oh that's interesting! I would like to see yours too :)