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Breaking Up

The day my love was rejected My soul itself,was so dejected All the nights drift into the surreal My life's..a nightmare..so unreal Pain touches my inner core The day she said no more..no more Concentration just flies away Tomorrow is always yesterday.... Questions,questions nag my mind Answers..missing I cannot find The perfect circle ,broke in two This curtain obliterates my view Her eyes said all there was to say Alone,we went our separate way Tomorrow is always yesterday....

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Constance La France

Date: 10/29/2019 7:34:00 AM

Brian, there is nothing more hurtful than rejected love and you describe it perfectly in your couplet poem, the pain just drips from your words !

Brian Strand
Date: 10/29/2019 8:20:00 AM

Yes Constance its why we poets are gifted with words.

Lena Townsend

Date: 6/13/2008 10:22:00 PM

Sad and touching and perfectly written. Great rhyme and flow. I hope that if this is reality you find happiness in a brand new day. You are very gifted to be able to express so much emotion in a way that your readers can feel the pain and sorrow. Some of us can even relate. Smiles from Lena "Lolita"

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/13/2008 2:47:00 PM

Dear Brian this is so very painful and heartbreaking. It is so well expressed that I am of course hoping it has nothing to do with reality. Love, Shar

Kristin Reynolds

Date: 6/13/2008 2:56:00 AM

Tomorrow is always yesterday...what a very sad and lonely line...I have felt this way many times before, and it is not a nice place to live. A beautiful write of love, Brian - love Kristin