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Breaking the Vail

When you choose to break down the vail Your successes in life are no longer set up to fail As you turn a blinding light upon the inner darkness Newfound depth perception is nothing short of starkness If what's given to bare is sent to a cave to hibernate What right do you have to expect others to relate When constantly choosing to have your cake and eat it too There will never be a slice left for others to have a part of you

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Date: 12/11/2022 12:53:00 PM
Oh so good. I find myself going “yesssss” at the end of reading this. A lovely day to you dear poet! xomo
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Date: 12/11/2022 12:59:00 PM
Simply xoxo thank you !

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