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Breaking Free

Folded closed, and left behind, .... perhaps for someone else to find... Perhaps the gentle rain is kind enough to wash away a threadbare heart, a broken dream, from yesterday... enchanting me to believe within, to entertain the child again A time to take a step apart, and time to grow, to break the hold where, once before, life shivered cold, beneath the shelter of the old Step past what eyes might estimate, with cleansing mists across the face to christen slates with glistening, new,... paths refreshed with pearls of dew. Listen to the whispered winds, the sweet refrains,of falling rain, as if I were a child again. Begin the walk where raindrops dance beneath the feet, in rainbow hue and mirrored worlds, where twin skies meet, as puddles ripple in the street where passers by, forget to see the beauty in a world scrubbed clean Stamp the feet to make a splash, while those around you make a dash With diamonds in the morning light, to quench a tongue in sheer delight To be as one, with earth and sun, and know that rain can be a friend hold up the hands to catch the sky,...the inner child is waiting in the wings
______________________________________________________ Inspired By Nette's Contest: Umbrella (image #2) Carrie Richards 3/1/14

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Date: 3/7/2014 9:10:00 PM
This truly deserved the win,congrats Carrie.
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Date: 3/7/2014 8:35:00 AM
Hi Carrie: Your beautiful poem congers up so much imagery. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 3/7/2014 4:45:00 AM
Nice take on the theme of the poem, congrats on the win, carrie
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Date: 3/7/2014 2:59:00 AM
- "THE UMBRELLA" Contest (by: Nette Onclaud) for the imagination - Congratulations on your winning poem, Carrie ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/7/2014 1:21:00 AM
Beautiful Carrie!! This whole poem makes me feel, just as you state, "as if I were a child again". Nicely done ... as always. Joe
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Date: 3/3/2014 7:17:00 PM
Carrie this is dern close to blank verse - Craig, Roy & Isaiah are real good at it why not let them help you fix the few meter stumbles? Very nice Carrie! Light & Love
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Date: 3/2/2014 7:12:00 AM
...the inner child is waiting in the wings...that sums up a very special and well expressed poem full of the most beautiful phrases. Very good and what a nice flow. // paul
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