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Shadorma
A Shadorma is of Spanish origin and consists of a 6 line stanza using the following syllable counts: 3/5/3/3/7/5. There is no rhyme scheme.

I recall every inch of you from your head to your toes, breaching death, memory dreams keep my heart pounding. (Shadorma) 12/31/2021 Bite-Size Poem #31 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier Used How Many Syllables

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Date: 1/12/2022 8:55:00 PM
"breaching death" - Great phrase and concept. Whole poem is beautiful. Congratulations!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/13/2022 9:05:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/12/2022 3:57:00 PM
That's very beautiful, Emile. Very sad. Congratulations on your win :)
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/13/2022 9:04:00 AM
Thanks, Ann, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 1/12/2022 9:37:00 AM
Lovely poem, Emile ~
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/12/2022 12:00:00 PM
Thanks, Line, as always, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/31/2021 2:36:00 PM
Lovely. God bless you. Love, Gina
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/1/2022 7:20:00 AM
Thanks, Regina, I appreciate your comments my friend, enjoy the holidays, Emile.

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