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Long lost affair Torrid and rare With its exotic flair True love we did declare To each other we did swear How could we be aware We didn’t have a prayer Youth was all we’d share The breeze in our hair Passion filled the air Loving we would dare Too carefree to heed beware I’d have followed you anywhere Nothing would ever compare Your shadow haunts me here and there My heart now branded with despair Submitted on January 15, 2021 for contest COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(40) ANY THEME ANY FORM sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 2ND Originally posted on February 5, 2019

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Date: 1/16/2021 10:00:00 AM
The simple richness of your rhyme reminds us all of the simplistic feelings of young love - "the breeze in our hair" - the lightness of our young love!
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Date: 1/16/2021 12:07:00 PM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment, Lonna ~
Date: 1/16/2021 8:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Wonderful" young love. This could be on a card. Enjoy your win/day with blessings...........
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Date: 1/16/2021 8:59:00 AM
Thank you very much, Paula ~
Date: 2/5/2019 10:06:00 PM
What a great poem I declare, such flair!
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Date: 2/5/2019 10:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Timothy.
Date: 2/5/2019 4:24:00 PM
Well-penned Monorhyme.
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Date: 2/5/2019 9:16:00 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, ML.

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