Brain Wing

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The night was too long for reflection. There was no rushing of the promontory. Bird-like arms were widespread. giving in to the wind's whims, Counting shadows alone. The insanity of a disturbed mind. Yet, how would I accurately portray you? You are flawless, but my writing is not. Insanity is draining my brain every time we have a conversation I really get the sense of everything is torpid They laced your thoughts with elegance and no offense taken, it was reassuring. Written: November 07, 2022

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 11/11/2022 6:28:00 AM

Wonderful descriptions like "...bird like arms" or the alliteration of "..wind's whims." Most creative. Your topic of insanity certainly invites much reflection. Be well. Brian

Bill Baker

Date: 11/8/2022 7:52:00 AM

And yet you still reflectively look within and your toughts transformed into poetry. I sometimes wonder how our minds can conjure up thoughts they we may be insane. It all comes down to how we think about our thoughts. The ego and life can really distort the beauty of the thinking process. I enjoy the poem and the thoughts it brought to my mind. Thanks for sharing my dear friend. Bill

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/8/2022 7:44:00 AM

Whoa!! Everything torpid. I wonder if that person is really slow of thought or of physical activity(maybe both). LOL.. If for a contest reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. I really like the view taken in that snapshot. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 11/7/2022 8:00:00 PM

Your writing too is flawless...... dear friend!