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SIX AND SEVEN Poetry Contest ~ Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud ~ Date Written:4/19/2026

BRACELET OF STARS

A child wishing upon the nightly stars.
What a bright star way over there,
another one twinkling just like a diamond.
I want all of them to hold,
one by one I make my bracelet.
What a bracelet of stars to behold.

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Dorothy Gibbons

April 28, 2026 at 4:28 AM

Wonderful poem on stars. Id love a bracelet lije u describe so perfectly. I love stars and moons hugs

Paula Goldsmith

April 28, 2026 at 12:35 PM

Great to see you here reading/writing. "Thank You" Glad you found this to be a, Wonderful poem on stars. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. I wish, I could make a pretty bracelet from stars. I also love the pretty stars/moon. Have a blessed/wonderful night writing away as you enjoy the pretty starts above.............

Evelyn Judy Buehler

April 23, 2026 at 8:50 PM

What a beauty of a poem, Paula, and what a bracelet that would be! Best wishes for the contest. :)

Paula Goldsmith

April 24, 2026 at 1:34 PM

Great to see you here reading/writing. "Thank You" Also Thanks for your, Best wishes for the contest. Glad you found this to be, a beauty of a poem. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. I wish, I could make a pretty bracelet from stars. Have a blessed/wonderful night writing away as you enjoy the pretty starts above.............

Joseph P. DiMino

April 21, 2026 at 12:03 PM

Stars are purely beautiful (not the Hollywood I mean) -- never seen one that did not bring glitter to my eyes. Look. Gaze. Others see where our eyes have been. And then write a sparkly poem like this one. Lovely.

Paula Goldsmith

April 22, 2026 at 12:04 PM

Great to see you here reading/writing. "Thank You" Glad you found this to be, Lovely. Yes, the stars above are lovely at night. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. I wish, I could make a pretty bracelet from stars. Have a blessed/wonderful night writing away as you enjoy the pretty starts above.............

David Crandall

April 21, 2026 at 6:40 AM

Good one! You know what they say - when you wish upon a star!

Paula Goldsmith

April 21, 2026 at 9:19 AM

Great to see you here reading/writing. "Thank You" Glad you found this to be a, Good one. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. If I wish upon a star, I will get a pretty bracelet made from stars??? Have a blessed/wonderful night writing away as you enjoy the pretty starts above.............

Charles Messina

April 21, 2026 at 4:00 AM

Just what a child would say, and some adults as well. Well-done, my dear friend. Best wishes in the contest, Paula. Have a nice day! Charlie

Paula Goldsmith

April 21, 2026 at 9:17 AM

Great to see you here reading/writing. "Thank You" Also Thanks for your, Best wishes in the contest. Glad you found this to be, Well-done. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. I would love a pretty bracelet made from stars. Have a blessed/wonderful night writing away as you enjoy the pretty starts above.............

Valsa George

April 20, 2026 at 11:42 PM

Very nice, dear Paula. All the best in the contest!

Paula Goldsmith

April 21, 2026 at 9:14 AM

Great to see you here reading/writing. "Thank You" Also Thanks for your, All the best in the contest. Glad you found this to be, Very nice. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Have a blessed/wonderful night writing away as you enjoy the pretty starts above.............

Andrea Dietrich

April 20, 2026 at 4:46 PM

Sweet one, Paula

Paula Goldsmith

April 21, 2026 at 9:12 AM

Great to see you here reading/writing. "Thank You" Glad you found this to be a, Sweet one. It was fun to write. Have a blessed/wonderful night writing away as you enjoy the pretty starts above.............

Malabika Ray Choudhury

April 20, 2026 at 3:10 PM

Lovely poem, Paula. I love gazing at stars in the night-sky - yes, it would be wonderful to have a bracelet of stars!

Paula Goldsmith

April 21, 2026 at 9:11 AM

Great to see you here reading/writing. "Thank You" Glad you found this to be a, Lovely poem. Oh yes, it would be great to have a pretty bracelet made from stars. Guess we can dream... Have a blessed/wonderful night writing away as you enjoy the pretty starts above.............

Susan Ashley

April 20, 2026 at 2:01 PM

Ah such a beautiful poem, dear Paula. I adore the shining imagery of a sky full of stars to make your golden bracelet of stars! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith

April 21, 2026 at 9:09 AM

Great to see you here reading/writing. "Thank You" Also Thanks for your, Warmest wishes. Glad you found this to be, such a beautiful poem. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. It would be great to have a golden bracelet made from stars. Guess we can dream... Have a blessed/wonderful night writing away as you enjoy the pretty starts above.............

Victor Buhagiar

April 20, 2026 at 2:35 AM

Must have cost a packet to obtain a bracelet of stars. Lovely poem.

Paula Goldsmith

April 21, 2026 at 8:45 AM

Great to see you here reading/writing. "Thank You" Glad you found this to be a, Lovely poem. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Stars can cost a lot unless you find a fallen star because they are free. Hahaha!!! Have a blessed/wonderful night writing away as you enjoy the pretty starts above.............

Karen Jones

April 19, 2026 at 3:22 PM

A fun imaginative poem! Best wishes!

Paula Goldsmith

April 21, 2026 at 8:42 AM

Great to see you here reading/writing. "Thank You" Also Thanks for your, Best wishes. Glad you found this to be, A fun imaginative poem. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Have a blessed/wonderful night writing away as you enjoy the pretty starts above.............

Beryl Edmonds

April 19, 2026 at 2:50 PM

What a lovely bracelet of stars poem Paula. All the best… Beryl

Paula Goldsmith

April 21, 2026 at 8:39 AM

Great to see you here reading/writing. "Thank You" Also Thanks for your, All the best. Glad you enjoyed my "BRACELET OF STARS" write. Have a blessed/wonderful night writing away as you enjoy the pretty starts above.............

Robert Pettit

April 19, 2026 at 12:58 PM

Good luck to you in the contest with this fine entry.

Paula Goldsmith

April 21, 2026 at 8:30 AM

Great to see you here reading/writing. "Thank You" Also Thanks for your, Good luck to you in the contest. Glad you found this to be a, fine entry. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. Have a blessed/wonderful night writing away as you enjoy the pretty starts above.............

Silent One

April 19, 2026 at 10:31 AM

So beautiful and tender my friend.. lovely use of the form.. I hope you are well...

Paula Goldsmith

April 19, 2026 at 11:18 AM

Great to see you here reading/writing. "Thank You" Glad you found this to be, So beautiful and tender my friend.. lovely use of the form. I enjoyed bringing this one to life. I love the stars with their beauty. I am well. Thanks for asking. Hope you are also well. Have a blessed/wonderful night writing away as you enjoy the pretty starts above.............

Paula Goldsmith

April 19, 2026 at 10:12 AM

"BRACELET OF STARS." ~ Date Written:4/19/2026 ~ Written By Human Poet......

SIX AND SEVEN Poetry Contest ~ Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud ~ Date Written:4/19/2026

BRACELET OF STARS

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