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By the river, near a tree so tall, Little boys gather, having a ball. Skipping stones with a splash and a cheer, Laughing loud as the ducks draw near. The tree stands strong with branches wide, A perfect spot for them to hide. They climb up high and swing on a vine, In the shade of leaves, they feel just fine. The river flows with a gentle hum, As boys shout, “Come on, let's run!” They race and play till the sun dips low, By the riverbank where cool winds blow. Under the tree, they dream and scheme, Of sailing boats down the river's gleam. With muddy boots and hearts so free, The boys make memories by the tree.

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Date: 9/30/2024 2:10:00 PM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Boys by river" write/story again... Have a great day with your win..................
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Date: 9/3/2024 8:48:00 PM
This image with your poem has evoked childhood memories of village life. I have often watched boys engaging in such out door activities and enjoying the evening by a riverside till sunset. Beautiful rhyme.
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Date: 9/3/2024 7:34:00 PM
Smile ! Boys will be boys and how much fun they can have before age takes them to another place and time, thank you for sharing this wonderful memory
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Date: 9/3/2024 1:16:00 PM
Nice days of summer play for young boys. Awesome poem, Jay.
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Date: 9/3/2024 1:10:00 PM
Great memories..
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Date: 9/3/2024 11:41:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun "Boys by river" write/story. "Good Luck" We both did this fun contest. Have a fun day writing away.....................
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