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Boxed

I've secured my box of empty thought, concealed it auspiciously below, so I may attain what I have sought; there beneath paint and attire bought; in an impervious frigid floe, I've secured my box of empty thought. I dare not oppose this ailment caught; these unsure stitches I'll again sew, so I may attain what I have sought, and it's done, I've shaped to what's been taught; emptiness ensues, because, now know, I've secured my box of empty thought. Truth be divulged, I have never fought, or attempted to expel my foe, so I may attain what I have sought, and it still creeps forth, held breath, most hot, taunting and slipping further, but - no! I've secured my box of empty thought so I may attain what I have sought.

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Date: 4/10/2016 1:25:00 AM
kaley burke, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/28/2015 7:24:00 PM
KALEY, Enjoyed this very much... SKAT
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Date: 6/6/2009 1:02:00 PM
Kaley,..congrats on an awesome write and making the winners list ! james
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Date: 6/2/2009 4:18:00 PM
"boxed" made it. Congrats Kaley. Vince
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Date: 6/1/2009 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations Kaley on your win. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/1/2009 4:03:00 AM
Awesome write Kaley. Warmest congrats on your well deserved win! Love, Shar
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Date: 5/31/2009 10:29:00 PM
Very original and melodic here, Kaley. Almost sings ... smile ... Congratulations on your win in the latest contest here at the Soup. I look forward to reading more of your writing soon.
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Date: 5/31/2009 1:39:00 PM
Congratulations on your honorable mention in the contest. Keep on writing! Enjoy your honor. Karen
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Date: 5/31/2009 1:08:00 PM
Congratulations my friend on your poem being featured this week. More power and success. Ernilando
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Date: 5/31/2009 10:25:00 AM
kaley, Villanelle is one of my favorite poetic forms. You have used it masterfully in this poem. I enjoyed the reading. Congratulations on having your poem, "Boxed" featured this week. Keep writing. Always, Dane"
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Date: 5/31/2009 9:34:00 AM
My warmest congratulations to you dear on your awesome placement… you are such a wonderful writer… please let your poetry pen keep dancing to the drum beat of your passions and poetrysoup-land. You are great. leke
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Date: 5/31/2009 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your poem being placed > James
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Date: 5/31/2009 5:35:00 AM
Congrats on your win Kaley! Great poem!
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Date: 5/31/2009 1:13:00 AM
Kaley, congratulations to you on your success placing in PS contest, bravo! Ernesto
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Date: 5/30/2009 11:23:00 PM
Kaley congratulations on placing is the soup contest, God Bless, MJ
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Date: 5/3/2009 11:57:00 AM
Kaley, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/26/2009 1:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your writing making it to the "first round survivor" list ... smile ... good luck in the contest, Kaley.
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Date: 4/10/2009 4:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals Kaley. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2009 11:39:00 AM
Wonderfully done within a very difficult form. You have captured the title in a unique and thought provoking way. It a well-deserved piece to be a feature this week at the Soup. Congratulations Kaley !!
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Date: 3/26/2009 11:14:00 AM
Dear Kaley, Congratulations on YOUR POEM "Boxed" being Featured this week repitition entices this Artistic Write ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 3/26/2009 9:07:00 AM
congrats on having your poem featured this week! keep up the good work!
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Date: 3/26/2009 8:23:00 AM
Hey, Kaley, I enjoyed your poem that is featured today and just want to tell you so. God bless you
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Date: 3/26/2009 7:00:00 AM
Congrats Kaley on your villanelle "Boxed" being featured. Vince
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Date: 3/26/2009 4:04:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. I really like the repitition in this peice. A"box of empty thought"... nice wording. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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