Bottles From Birth To Tomb

From bottled feed soon after birth 
To liquor in a lifetime’s mirth, 
To blest bottled water 
When at death breaths falter, 
Oh bottles rife till one with earth!
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 Reflections | 01.12.2017, recast Jan 2023 | on life

Poet’s note: I had the misfortune to see an old acquaint dying some time back. He had lost mother soon after birth. Milk bottles in lieu of  mother nourished his early life. A single father, who could not quite be the mother, raised him as a child. Wasted childhood saw him to grow as a careless youth, liquor his constant companion. When I saw a few drops of bottled Ganges water administered to him as the last rite, it made me reflect on life.  Don’t go by the rather flippant tongue of a limerick, see the irony of life.
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January 3, 2023 at 6:51 AM
Some just get a raw deal in life, and even in death is reminded so.
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