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I hear a voice whispering gently bring me home standing on sands of time leaving a footprint upon the soul holding hands out in kissing dreams My fingers reach out passing yours a touch softly sailing an ocean flowing to you paradise island chambers reserved in a dream My breath trembles anticipating inhale exhale escalating once kissed the soul becomes real a dazzling treasure held in chambers forever more A little nightingale flew out my heart window resting in yours

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Date: 10/20/2013 5:38:00 AM
Deadly romantic. What the hell do you drink over there. Give me some of that.
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Date: 10/18/2013 3:09:00 PM
Ahhh!! Enjoyed the romantic and passionate work..Sara
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Date: 10/18/2013 2:17:00 AM
- Always enjoyable to read your beautiful poem, Liam - Thanks for posting! - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/17/2013 6:15:00 PM
It doesn't get much more romantic than this! Your words flow so softly and effortlessly here, almost as if you write in whispers. A beautiful, beautiful piece of poetry, Liam!
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Date: 10/17/2013 4:54:00 PM
a little nightingale flew out my heart window restimg in yours.You are the prince of romantic verse..awesome!!!
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