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Sunrise shrinks darkness into small shadows cowering behind clouds blocking its rays. And unleashes colors shackled to black as Dawn sets ebony heavens ablaze. A scarlet sun inks cotton candy clouds pink, as if painted by the hand of God. And as its crimson rays caress my skin, I feel my soul approvingly applaud. A sensual sensation cocoons me, as my body is encased in sunshine. And awed by my connection to nature, conciseness, and reality align. Upon God declaring, “Let there be light,” sunbeams lit the day, moonbeams lit the night.

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Date: 3/26/2018 9:50:00 PM
Back with congrats, Emile. Well done.
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Date: 3/27/2018 8:55:00 AM
Thanks Linel, I appreciate you support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/22/2018 4:40:00 AM
Congratulations, Emile on your win. Beautiful imagery in a flowing sonnet.
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Date: 3/22/2018 9:18:00 AM
Thanks Subimal, I appreciate you support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/21/2018 10:54:00 AM
Emile, what a great sonnet, but even greater, your acknowledgment of Who made the sunshine. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/21/2018 11:14:00 AM
Thanks Curtis, I appreciate you support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/21/2018 10:49:00 AM
A lovely winning sonnet, congrats Emile for another win!
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Date: 3/21/2018 11:15:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate the opportunity my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/7/2018 9:01:00 PM
Lovely, Emile. My favorite line is "I swear, that I can hear my soul applaud." I can relate.
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Date: 3/8/2018 9:59:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate you insightful comments. Emile.
Date: 3/7/2018 4:14:00 PM
Another beautiful poem Emile. I love it. So well written and comforting. A favorite. Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 3/7/2018 5:50:00 PM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate you support my friend, Emile.

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