Born Day

In travail Mother cries Baby born In hunger Newborn cries Tender care Bond of love Forged in womb Warm kisses 28th January 2023 Form: Tricube

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/31/2023 6:27:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Jo - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 1/30/2023 6:48:00 AM

Lovely poem, Jo. Congratulations on your win. :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/30/2023 4:19:00 AM

Thank you for your participation in my contest. I enjoyed reading your entry. Very creative way to go. Sara

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/29/2023 9:05:00 PM

Wonderful new-born scene. Beautiful. Congratulations!

Valsa George

Date: 1/29/2023 8:08:00 PM

This is so beautiful ! From the birth pangs to the eternal bond between a mother and child, so beautifully knit together. Congratulations on your win dear Jo

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/27/2023 10:48:00 PM

Hi Jo…. this is great.Am posting one tomorrow on Mom and her baby, Panagiota xo