Borealis

In a glimmered lace of sunrise’s veil, dawn hovers like a freshly-cleansed nymph, wafting and bubbling with a spice of mint in dew’s chastity pool delicately undressed. The path of upturned boughs rips free and slides along a froth of peppered mist; misty in a way newborn day becomes pastel fingers where wings of her breath become illumined as it is daring;calling forth, Borealis...Borealis. And a deluge of herb wraps her air: a seasoning moment for this flushed lady to unfold the carpet of studded foliage cradling around her heady arms... soon, a gush of light bears newly-wed rays, until the fragrance of earth drifts upon her mantle feeling the delicacy of radiant morn, weightlessly white; no one wants to speak. Feb 2018 Premeire Contest: Brian Strand Pepost 2/14/2018
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Gauthier Avatar
February 18, 2018 at 3:51 PM
Congrats on your win, nette. Well done.
Smith Avatar
February 17, 2018 at 11:01 AM
Lovely Nette, congratulations...
A  Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 7:41 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
Kimathi Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 10:49 AM
Congrats to your awesome WIN Nette!!!! ^_^
Dietrich Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 4:57 PM
I can see how this one scored big. Your usual flair with imagery has garnered you top spot. Congrats, dearie.
A   Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 2:45 PM
Hello, Nette, Congratulations on your "Aurora And Avalanche" win.... LINDA
Nunez Avatar
April 28, 2015 at 11:56 AM
Stunning imagery and such lovely poetry, Nette. Congratulations on your top of the podium win! Kim :) :)
Reams Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 9:00 PM
This is fantastic Nette! Congrats on your win.
Richards Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 7:26 PM
Just beautiful, with the ability you have for description that takes the breath away !!Congratulations to you dear Nette!
Haight Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 4:11 PM
So lovely, Nette. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 2:46 PM
dropping back with my congrats Nette - well deserved top spot:-) Hugs Jan xx
Ebbs Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 2:14 PM
Congrats on this Nette, good job :)
La France Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 1:34 PM
Nette. congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful poem....
Ackerson Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 9:55 AM
I love "weightlessly white" - congrats on your win, Nette!
Roper Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 9:00 AM
Nette,congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings dear friend
Guzzi Avatar
April 27, 2015 at 8:16 AM
Loved how you did the topic and all the alliteration! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Vaso Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 10:07 PM
Very touching, and a more special meaning to me, loved this!
Chircop Avatar
February 28, 2015 at 3:13 PM
Magical and beautiful sweet friend!
Peranteau Avatar
February 26, 2015 at 8:45 AM
It sounds to me dear poet, that you have seen first hand these Northern lights ! Awesome write Nette.......have a beautiful week my friend........much love, james
La France Avatar
February 26, 2015 at 6:22 AM
nette, your beautiful words are so breathtaking and magical, you have created an entrancing poem and thank you again for my fine placement in your tarot contest, I am honoured . . .
Sewell Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 9:08 PM
Enchanting!
Meade Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 7:42 PM
a sacred moment when the elements of nature -- join hands and begin a ritual that is ancient and holy. Your words give homage to the moment -- even your spaces sing praises . . . lovely dear nette. 7, fav
Kendrick Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 3:52 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work wrapped in herbs..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Kiser Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 3:32 PM
That was really superb and I give it a 7.
Smith Avatar
February 25, 2015 at 3:25 PM
A beautiful morning nette....huggs
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