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Borealis

In a glimmered lace of sunrise’s veil, dawn hovers like a freshly-cleansed nymph, wafting and bubbling with a spice of mint in dew’s chastity pool delicately undressed. The path of upturned boughs rips free and slides along a froth of peppered mist; misty in a way newborn day becomes pastel fingers where wings of her breath become illumined as it is daring;calling forth, Borealis...Borealis. And a deluge of herb wraps her air: a seasoning moment for this flushed lady to unfold the carpet of studded foliage cradling around her heady arms... soon, a gush of light bears newly-wed rays, until the fragrance of earth drifts upon her mantle feeling the delicacy of radiant morn, weightlessly white; no one wants to speak. Feb 2018 Premeire Contest: Brian Strand Pepost 2/14/2018

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Date: 2/18/2018 3:51:00 PM
Congrats on your win, nette. Well done.
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Date: 2/17/2018 11:01:00 AM
Lovely Nette, congratulations...
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Date: 4/30/2015 7:41:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 4/30/2015 10:49:00 AM
Congrats to your awesome WIN Nette!!!! ^_^
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Date: 4/28/2015 4:57:00 PM
I can see how this one scored big. Your usual flair with imagery has garnered you top spot. Congrats, dearie.
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Date: 4/28/2015 2:45:00 PM
Hello, Nette, Congratulations on your "Aurora And Avalanche" win.... LINDA
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Date: 4/28/2015 11:56:00 AM
Stunning imagery and such lovely poetry, Nette. Congratulations on your top of the podium win! Kim :) :)
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Date: 4/27/2015 9:00:00 PM
This is fantastic Nette! Congrats on your win.
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Date: 4/27/2015 7:26:00 PM
Just beautiful, with the ability you have for description that takes the breath away !!Congratulations to you dear Nette!
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Date: 4/27/2015 4:11:00 PM
So lovely, Nette. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/27/2015 2:46:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Nette - well deserved top spot:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/27/2015 2:14:00 PM
Congrats on this Nette, good job :)
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Date: 4/27/2015 1:34:00 PM
Nette. congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful poem....
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Date: 4/27/2015 9:55:00 AM
I love "weightlessly white" - congrats on your win, Nette!
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Date: 4/27/2015 9:00:00 AM
Nette,congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings dear friend
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Date: 4/27/2015 8:16:00 AM
Loved how you did the topic and all the alliteration! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 2/28/2015 10:07:00 PM
Very touching, and a more special meaning to me, loved this!
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Date: 2/28/2015 3:13:00 PM
Magical and beautiful sweet friend!
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Date: 2/26/2015 8:45:00 AM
It sounds to me dear poet, that you have seen first hand these Northern lights ! Awesome write Nette.......have a beautiful week my friend........much love, james
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Date: 2/26/2015 6:22:00 AM
nette, your beautiful words are so breathtaking and magical, you have created an entrancing poem and thank you again for my fine placement in your tarot contest, I am honoured . . .
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Date: 2/25/2015 9:08:00 PM
Enchanting!
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Date: 2/25/2015 7:42:00 PM
a sacred moment when the elements of nature -- join hands and begin a ritual that is ancient and holy. Your words give homage to the moment -- even your spaces sing praises . . . lovely dear nette. 7, fav
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Date: 2/25/2015 3:52:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work wrapped in herbs..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 2/25/2015 3:32:00 PM
That was really superb and I give it a 7.
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Date: 2/25/2015 3:25:00 PM
A beautiful morning nette....huggs
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