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Boomerang

BOOMERANG A long crooked path That is life Walk-it-out in any direction finding mountain-born canyons rapid falls the gathering of wish dust active or mental lust No matter the course there will be return return and on the run! Your path now obscured by natural maturity – trees with many branches swamps of clumsy creation This dart (even though shaven sanded smooth) will find its mark And thee become (perhaps old and gray) thee become (perhaps) skeptic will call out to HIM HELP! “What have you learned?” HE will say Now begins the real contemplation What will you carry over into some new direction? “What is the plan?” this question asked again and again at some nebulous point On the wheel

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Date: 6/21/2011 2:26:00 PM
Astoundingly good write Daver, enjoyed the reflective angle and overall depth i found . Credit here for it is due..
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Date: 6/11/2011 6:00:00 PM
Daver a stunning write and terrific parallel with life and the boomerang effect ..almost like a seesaw of ups and downs.. .. luv the last few lines of ending my friend.. a thought provoking one luv..
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Date: 6/11/2011 1:46:00 PM
Daver, I'm glad you picked up on the message in the "what if" doubts poem. We have a choice between worrying about "what if this and what if that" or learning from our past mistakes. Thanks for understanding what I was trying to convey. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/10/2011 3:07:00 PM
Dadgum, Daver, only you could write a meaningful poem about a boomerang! Indeed, "What is the plan?" A fella I dated gave me a boomerang for Christmas (I'd bought him a suede coat). When I suggested we go outside and toss it around, he said I'd need lessons first. So what exactly was I supposed to do with this boomerang and the "tribal mask" that came with it??? Men mystify me. Enjoyed your poem very much. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/9/2011 10:52:00 AM
Hi Daver! I belong to the USBA (United States Boomerang Assoc.) and throw all the time! I'm a lefty!!! how 'bout U?...jimbo
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Date: 6/10/2011 10:18:00 AM
Sorry, just an idea, James. Your Boomerang club sounds like fun. Love, daver
Date: 6/8/2011 3:21:00 PM
Oh, so deeply profound, Daver! Those "boomerangs do come back to either be caught in the hand, or to smack one across the head. Lots happening here, Daver. Questions, "contemplation", making assessments while reviewing one's actions? One can only wish, hope, and PRAY! This week the maple was dropping full of their boomerang seeds, like a mass of chances? Asking "HIM" for "HELP" sounds like the most plausible solution. Wishing you and yours the best!! Love, Mikki
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Daver Austin
Date: 6/10/2011 10:29:00 AM
Yes! Even the most confirmed atheist will - reluctantly, of course - ask for HELP
Date: 6/8/2011 8:47:00 AM
Wow, what a very thought provoking write, Dave and I honestly appreciate how your writes always make me think-- love your formatting here too, always so interesting to read your fine works-- and thank you for your inspiring comments-- you made me smile SOO much--could be me under the tree, stuffing myself silly with m&m's or yumm kisses would be yumm too :) hugs and oops, burrp as well ^_^ enjoy your day :D
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Date: 6/7/2011 9:19:00 PM
Very deep, Daver. It's truly a WHEEL and we are like little hamsters on it!!
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Date: 6/7/2011 8:04:00 PM
I've beenstuding a book (anthology for the last two days my dear poetic friend...Old world poetry, and your writes fit so well in these writes Dave, I am looking forward to more of your Good giving ! Have a blessed night my friend, and ty for your comments on my writes sir ! Much love, james
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Date: 6/7/2011 5:50:00 PM
a great piece you penned here daver, really enjoyed it. thank you for commenting on cloudy again.
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Date: 6/7/2011 5:47:00 PM
the gathering of wish dust ... active or mental lust.. I am enjoying this contemplative poem Daver along with the remakable phrases that make it up. Seems as thoough we are meandering through these mountain -born canyons together... and I guess we all are together and alone. That last question must echo through those canyons of time an exponential number of times... enjoyed this write my friend- Bob
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