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Bones Ache Yet Heart Sings

Once upon a time when I was a child of three looking at the stars and whispering to the moon, I sang me a song of love; then the years went by and I lost my girlish ways forgetting the view I saw, life became unclear as dry bones began to ache Returning to love I recalled the moon and stars and the girl who sang; When I was a child of nine, yes, the world was truly mine The whispering moon was a big fat red balloon that made my heart sing; Though I always sang in tune, life was over, way too soon. June 20, 2023 Sponsor Unseeking Seeker Contest Name Bones ache yet heart sings

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Date: 6/23/2023 2:10:00 PM
Rarely does poetry HERE put a smile on my face. I felt like you were strumming my fate with your fingers. Good one I would expect to see in a book. A+
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Date: 6/24/2023 5:59:00 AM
Thank you dear John, glad you enjoyed the poem, I'll take the A+ with a smile !
Date: 6/20/2023 9:39:00 AM
A heartfelt poem as only are capable of writing. Hugs.
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Date: 6/21/2023 8:05:00 PM
How we hang on to dear life when we get older, recalling the most beautiful pivotal moments of our lives.
Date: 6/20/2023 6:45:00 AM
- A lovely touching poem, Vie Rose :) - hugs
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Date: 6/20/2023 9:27:00 AM
Thank you dear Anne glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 6/20/2023 5:39:00 AM
A charming lookback--much enjoyed the reflective write, Vienna.
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Date: 6/20/2023 9:27:00 AM
Thank you dear Vijay for stopping by my poem. Have a great day :)
Date: 6/20/2023 4:56:00 AM
Great take on the theme, Vie, with a touch of poignancy:)
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Date: 6/20/2023 9:27:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by dear poet friend :)
Date: 6/20/2023 4:24:00 AM
Love it. God bless you. Love - Gina
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Date: 6/20/2023 9:27:00 AM
Thankyou dear Gina, glad you liked it :)

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