boner beach

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VERY NAUGHTY AND BAWDY

They sit on the beach acting the loner She slowly walks by wearing nothing but toner With a flick of the hair And a jolly good pair She leaves ‘em, heads in the sand, hiding a *****

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/21/2024 9:27:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your "Boner Beach" Limerick write. Thanks for the laugh... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a wonderful Autumn day................

Lin Lane

Date: 10/21/2024 4:15:00 AM

Well, haven't you set up a scene that paints itself in the mind! lol It should be drawn as a cartoon. Only taking care to bury the right heads in the sand.

Di11y Da11y

Date: 10/21/2024 12:47:00 AM

Hilarious John! So many alternate last lines. Who knew the word 'boner' had such poetic range! I'm sure it'll find it's way into the erm halls of fame eventually lol

Chris Conn

Date: 10/20/2024 11:37:00 PM

You’re confusing naughty with shame.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/20/2024 11:14:00 PM

Lol this is so funny! Haha gosh! I love the rhymes and how you’ve got this idea as always so clever dear john