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Bone Beach

Dredged from the depths of a shaken Sennen seashell she hears once more his voice, low, sonorous tones, sees the bones of her past laid out, splayed out, another story playing out, can feel it in her bones, his voice burrowing in, deep beneath skin, a cold blade digging in, the tide coming in, shrouds of sea mist closing in, the veil blowing thin, membranes of memory breaking...She sees anew the drowning seas, sees for the first time his strangling hands, pebbly skulls, seaweed ropes, skeletal fingers of coral forcing bone-white wrecking lights into her cove... Bone-bleached semen strands, Sennen's strand stretching soiled sand before her like life or fate, grains like pulverised bones. His dark-dune lurking, water-window watching, waiting for riptides; a ripping of fabric, ripping of hymen, sea-hymns now silent on salt-sheened lips plump-pouty with youth. It's sordid, uncouth, the salt sprinkle of sea-sweat sheening his skin, the breath and the fingers quickening, the coral's rough rigidity piercing, ejaculation of sea foam... Buried deeper than bones, the sudden rush of memory waves rattling bones of the past, shaking Sennen seashells. Gulls screaming into the guilty hush. Secrets hidden by sea-silenced sand.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 12/11/2024 7:02:00 PM
' her past laid out, splayed out ' and then, ' a cold blade digging in; the tide coming in. ' Seems a little suspicious to me. Sounds like murder ! ! Like someone is trying to hide the body. Your words capture the gruesome moment within, my dear friend. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 11/4/2024 3:51:00 PM
Love this. Did she get murdered as Tommy said? In my simple tanka on this theme there was murder. The rape description goes so well with the imagery and metaphors of the sea , etc bso vivid.
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Date: 11/1/2024 4:29:00 AM
Sad journey of despair, and probably echoed throughout the world. I like the build up to this, you miss nothing out. Isn't life full of boulders and memories.
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 11/3/2024 7:19:00 AM
it sure is
Date: 10/26/2024 5:54:00 AM
Oh good gosh, a rape of a minor and a murder? Buried in the sand? And the metaphors employed! Well, this isn't Mary had a little lamb, for sure. That was never your style anyway. Brutal poetry
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Tom Woody
Date: 10/28/2024 10:17:00 AM
Ha!
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Charlotte Puddifoot
Date: 10/28/2024 9:32:00 AM
opals and periwinkles are my true style
Date: 10/25/2024 9:11:00 PM
The depth of the imagery all but illuminate the symbolism. Seeming to endure it's out of bodied wait leave an obscured realization. Keep showing the grim reality that can happen. Open a way to express the dread.
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Date: 10/25/2024 4:25:00 PM
A weakness of limb sensation came over me with such haunting imagery. Terrifying for her. It gave me the heebie-jeebies, then angered and emasculation by dissection came to mind. Uplifting wishes, Charlotte ~Anaya's faving
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Date: 10/24/2024 2:36:00 PM
This is violence ripped from the soul's reality. Semen, ejaculation, hymen just devastating terms in context of worst case scenario. Raw, angst-inducing. Prayers lifted for calming dreams, Celestial Embrace. :o[
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Date: 10/24/2024 1:01:00 PM
Hey Charlotte, your poem is a powerful meditation on the interplay of memory, desire, and trauma, presented through striking imagery and rich symbolism. The journey through your past is fraught with pain and complexity, illuminating how memories can haunt and shape our present selves. he concluding lines—“Secrets hidden by sea-silenced sand”—suggest that despite the weight of these memories, there may still be aspects of the past that remain buried, hinting at the complexities of understanding and confronting our own history.
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Date: 10/23/2024 4:19:00 PM
Dear Charlotte, I stopped by to read your latest and loved this well inked poem. Being a counselor I saw themes of memory, trauma, and the haunting presence of the past. But you also show the beauty of the sea with darker memories, symbolized by bones and skeletal imagery. What a mix of intimacy and violence, as represented by the "strangling hands" and "seaweed ropes." Excellent! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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