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Bonded By Words and Blood

eyes met eyes, teeth sink no disguise, established link enveloped whole, ghoulish clasp clear goal, one deceitful ask "please let me in" I freeze, you win willingly I collapse into your arms head spinning, silent alarms contented, warm, safe, held internal panic, can't stop mind meld unwillingly elated, changes begin feed until sated, shackled to new kin humanity burned away, lost in the fire bloodlust my one and only desire for now I am vampyre

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Tania Kitchin

Date: 11/2/2023 4:14:00 PM

Dilly, I enjoyed your poem and the unique creativity in this one, congratulations on your winning placement.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/2/2023 4:15:00 PM

Thanks Tania, much appreciated

David Kavanagh

Date: 10/8/2023 1:58:00 PM

I am powerless to resist all Vamps Dilly, got to admit they have a certain charm and pull about them, just like your poem here, love the message embedded throughout, forget the garlic and crosses go straight for the jugular lol, an excellent piece, cheers David

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/8/2023 3:12:00 PM

OMG - be careful how you phrase things to ex goths David haha. I appreciate the joke and the high praise for the poem :)

Lin Lane

Date: 10/8/2023 6:47:00 AM

ummm... don't ever look into a vamp's eyes. Cagey with the acrostic message, Dilly.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/8/2023 7:06:00 AM

okie dokes ;-)

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/8/2023 7:03:00 AM

Not at all - this is for spooky contest and it was just attempt to ham it up slightly

Lin Lane
Date: 10/8/2023 6:58:00 AM

Did I spoil it? Forgive if I did.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/8/2023 6:57:00 AM

Ahh the hidden message hypnotic device needs more work perhaps...