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Body In Winter

Her final gasp escapes her frozen form with eyes staring listlessly up at the heavens-- And diamond-like crystals lap at her skin My heart trembles ; my face grating as sobs rack my shoulders with convulsive despair It rains -- flakes glitter And my tears fall upon dear sister's winter body. 11 June 2018 Brian Strand Contest

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Date: 9/6/2018 7:54:00 AM
Carly, this is so sad, but the raw emotion is captured and expressed so well.
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