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Body Ails Yet Spirit Soars

With elements of earth, water, air, ether, and fire
The body is framed like a bundle of paradoxes.
The soul, the lord, and the master of this self soar higher.
When its mission, herein, is accomplished as flummoxes

Diseases, like swarms of honey bees, enwrap this physique.
These, like water on lotus leaves, don't affect the spirit.
Though veins, bones, and nutrients are full, the physique seems weak.
Existence, herein, passes like a clandestine claret.

Deep sleep drubs the body, but the spirit is on the move.
Beyond mountains and valleys, like a tender breeze, it blows
From all that is known to the unknown, narrow furrow grove
Journeying towards perfection, like a fountain, it flows

Entering another body, the soul gladly exists.
Physique, as the spirit's wagon, wins over all the twists…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Empress Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 11:31 PM
“ like water on lotus leaves, don't affect the spirit” this line especially stood out for me. What a deeply moving and meaningful take on the prompt. I love the flow of your words too. Congratulations on your win. Well deserved
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 12, 2023 at 12:39 PM
Aloha, Christuraj. I welcome your cascading words via the sharing of the multitude that abounds your regional home and their blessed souls, my friend. My compliments on your win in USS contest. Aloha, William
Rodrigues Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 5:45 AM
Though my belief differs, I enjoyed the imagery of your write. It has a beautiful flow. The body is framed like a bundle of paradoxes…Like swarms of honey bees…like a tender breeze…
Jones Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 12:33 AM
Thought provoking and deep. Enjoyed reading. Also sent you soupmail if you didn't get the notification. My notifications I turned off. Hugs.
Alex Avatar
October 31, 2023 at 2:01 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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