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She's in the front row of his concert Awaiting her turn on stage Her obsession she'll soon exert She's too far gone to disengage Like an eagle in the skies She watches him with cyber eyes Her love for him is quite bizarre A fan obsessed with a rock star He's become her shadow lover In silhouettes that blur what's real She's gone too far undercover Her twisted mind unable to feel She will stalk him now until she gets her wish To be his desire, his sexy dish But if she is rejected and is not Then that begins her sinister plot -- 11-8-17

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Date: 11/18/2017 5:49:00 PM
Such a well-written poem, Joseph. Congratulations on your fine placement. Sandra
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Date: 11/18/2017 5:01:00 AM
Sincere congrats on your well-deserved win, Joseph ... blessings! :-)
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Date: 11/17/2017 4:29:00 PM
Congratulations for your win Joseph :)
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Date: 11/17/2017 2:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Joseph May
Date: 11/17/2017 2:35:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Silent One
Date: 11/9/2017 3:48:00 PM
Awesome write Joseph. And good luck in the contest... hugs :)
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Joseph May
Date: 11/9/2017 5:05:00 PM
Thank you Akkina
Date: 11/8/2017 8:52:00 PM
Joseph, I love the write . I remember when I was young my love for a rock star, but not on computer... Hugs Eve
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Joseph May
Date: 11/9/2017 5:04:00 PM
Thank you Kim
Date: 11/8/2017 8:24:00 PM
Excellent entry for contest!
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Joseph May
Date: 11/9/2017 5:04:00 PM
Thank you Kim
Date: 11/8/2017 3:09:00 PM
Oh, is this for the stalking contest? WEll done, Joseph. I think in last line you mean Her, right?? It's frightening how many such individuals exist in this world.
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Joseph May
Date: 11/9/2017 5:04:00 PM
Thank you Andrea
Date: 11/8/2017 2:56:00 PM
That is obsession for you.. well written, nice rhymes and flow..
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Joseph May
Date: 11/9/2017 5:03:00 PM
Thank you S1
Date: 11/8/2017 2:12:00 PM
Joseph, wonderful poem and best of luck in the contest!
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Joseph May
Date: 11/8/2017 5:20:00 PM
Thank you BW
Date: 11/8/2017 1:29:00 PM
Well depicted Joseph--feel the obsession in her moves!
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Joseph May
Date: 11/8/2017 5:20:00 PM
Thank you Vijay

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