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Blunt Knife

driven by a painful stain i say yes to 
1/2 empty Bukowski tankards 
full of dusty nothings meanwhile sitting 
in shallow quicksand @ 96 sweaty degrees 
in this emerging limbo 
of rent-per-hour eye blinks 
flicking rusty milagros erecting 
indifferent sentinels to guard 
against a past-due event 
of forgettable magnitude 
breathing as if here but not really 
there feeling all kinda so sharp 
betrayal yet acutely bland as if 
a still deeper black 
could hide the stitches 
if maybe kinda as though 
the pain of being discarded 
could fade to fuzzy 
and not hurt like a blunt knife 
cutting with careless regret 
and lack of purpose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 6/9/2016 11:19:00 PM
well expressed.... Ricardo... SKAT
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Date: 3/5/2016 4:09:00 PM
I think Bukowski would like it!
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