Bluebirds

Before the war
bluebirds were just blue birds.

We danced the fright away,
with crazy made-up steps,
some thought us reckless
but the moon was in our eyes.

Bombs arrived.
CNN played the death count down,
until it too was obliterated.

Scorched bodies
tumbled listlessly,
down deserted streets.

Many took to the sewage systems.
Down there in the stinking dark,
the rats were dancing,
with an insane
and tortured frenzy,
as if

angry bluebirds
pecked
at their maddened eyes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Empress Avatar
January 16, 2024 at 9:04 AM
Powerful and soul hitting write really! The depth of this stood out for me and resonates during times like now. Pleasure reading such meaningful writes like yours always
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January 16, 2024 at 9:51 AM
Thank you Ink Empress, your read and warm review is so very welcome and appreciated. All the best E.
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