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BLUE YONDER

rose hips ripening sun,backlights the pampas palms- shades of shadowed fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/9/2009 1:57:00 AM
Love the last line, great work...Raul
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Date: 10/6/2009 7:59:00 AM
Beautiful Haiku, Brian! Such lovely images. I love the Fall and watching its' beauty grow - unfortuately the cold follows! Love, Robin
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Date: 10/5/2009 9:30:00 AM
Perfect Haiku and so beautiful. Thank you for sharing with us Brian. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/5/2009 8:40:00 AM
A lovely Haiku Brian. Smile. Love Light Truth Patty
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Date: 10/5/2009 8:16:00 AM
Even as I expect, Smile, a superb Haiku Brian, Thanks for the congrats, Sincerely, moses
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Date: 10/5/2009 6:29:00 AM
I am allergic to rose hips.....I am breaking out already....HEhE......:JP]
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Date: 10/5/2009 4:53:00 AM
Interesting scene here. Nicely written Haiku. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/5/2009 2:31:00 AM
Excellent seasonal Haiku , Brian . The boys in Blue , blew away the Reds , last Sat . !! Ouch !! , it looked like an Irish Eurovision result !! ... 30 - 0 ......
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