Blue Yonder

rose hips ripening sun,backlights the pampas palms- shades of shadowed fall

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Raul Moreno

Date: 10/9/2009 1:57:00 AM

Love the last line, great work...Raul

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/6/2009 7:59:00 AM

Beautiful Haiku, Brian! Such lovely images. I love the Fall and watching its' beauty grow - unfortuately the cold follows! Love, Robin

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/5/2009 9:30:00 AM

Perfect Haiku and so beautiful. Thank you for sharing with us Brian. Love, Carol

P Sheart

Date: 10/5/2009 8:40:00 AM

A lovely Haiku Brian. Smile. Love Light Truth Patty

John Freeman

Date: 10/5/2009 8:16:00 AM

Even as I expect, Smile, a superb Haiku Brian, Thanks for the congrats, Sincerely, moses

Jared Pickett

Date: 10/5/2009 6:29:00 AM

I am allergic to rose hips.....I am breaking out already....HEhE......:JP]

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/5/2009 4:53:00 AM

Interesting scene here. Nicely written Haiku. Keep writing. Sara

Sean Kelly

Date: 10/5/2009 2:31:00 AM

Excellent seasonal Haiku , Brian . The boys in Blue , blew away the Reds , last Sat . !! Ouch !! , it looked like an Irish Eurovision result !! ... 30 - 0 ......