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Blue Whisper

The blue verge of urge dances when you eat A fleshy blueberry from the blue tree A blue bouquet blooms out in your red tweet In my quick rooms a thrush in a blue spree All the blue birds in the wood now upbeat All the blue dews from air on your pink grass All love of the blue sky in our heartbeat All our blue love in some dove like pink hush From endless blue star-night, our hearts of bird Swallow-blue dreams they gather in blue cone Most of blue letters get reduced to shard In your blue voice we still love the brown tone Those of us who have seen this deep blue breath They feel the blue whisper of life and death __________________________________________ 27/01/2017

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Date: 1/31/2017 8:47:00 AM
Hi Probir, what lovely hues of blue you have created on an awesome palette! Bravo and have a wonderful day! Pandita
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/31/2017 8:27:00 PM
Thank you, Pandita ...
Date: 1/27/2017 10:34:00 PM
Very well done on the use of blues good luck in the contest Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/28/2017 6:07:00 AM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 1/27/2017 6:19:00 PM
your blue shines through like this incredible write, probir...huggs
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Date: 1/28/2017 6:08:00 AM
Thank you, nette ...
Date: 1/27/2017 2:54:00 PM
- Beautiful ... even in blue, Probir - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/28/2017 6:08:00 AM
very well said! ... Thank you ...
Date: 1/27/2017 3:01:00 AM
Reading your poem my friend, Probir, I was elated that means I did not get the..blues! A seven!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/27/2017 6:08:00 AM
You will never be in the blues as you are always all ears to the divine whisper! ... thank you ...
Date: 1/26/2017 9:26:00 PM
Wow Probir, what a great poem! With an even more fantastic ending line! Impressive my friend! : ) 7
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Probir Gupta
Date: 1/27/2017 6:10:00 AM
Glad you like it ... thank you ...
Date: 1/26/2017 8:46:00 PM
We have a TV commercial here in the US that says "feel the blue" I always enjoy reading your sonnets, Probir. Good luck my friend:)
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Date: 1/27/2017 6:14:00 AM
Well ... I will try to watch the serial if accessible in internet ... thank you for enjoying the sonnet ...

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