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Blue Wave Rising

now i like your sweet beautiful waving lashes floating on a crest fluttering seductive style in that silent hush blowing wind fluttering air upon your breath musically whispering out of one breeze sweetly singing out a songbird charming beauty entering the mind swept away feelings in this deep ocean swells around you darling look after the key to this heart opening up doors to you take a seat smiling golden gleaming sun shine

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/27/2014 6:31:00 AM
You do romance so very well. Excellent write!!!!
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Date: 5/27/2014 8:25:00 AM
Keep up the great work, Liam! You have a distinct way of capturing beauty.
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Date: 5/25/2014 6:01:00 PM
I love your title to begin ,the vision is so romantic .Nice piece of flowing along ..
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Date: 5/25/2014 3:51:00 PM
Beautiful imagery and personification, Liam. Deserves a top rating! // paul
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