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Blue Tits

Blue **** are singing outside my bedroom window, Every time I look there seems to be a bird you know, And their vocalisations make me aware of myself, Under the cuff sometimes and only on a shelf; They take me to nature, that vast canopy bright, Into truth and morality’s mechanisms of height, For a glimpse of who I am essentially, credentially, Unknown to me otherwise, were it not for that tit truly, Longing to get on with it, I go, more of my seeds to sow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/6/2016 12:34:00 AM
Hi, Rhoda, Congratulations on your "Beautiful-Acrostic Win." ~LINDA~
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Date: 1/3/2016 11:16:00 PM
RHODA, CONGRATS on your win. skat
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Date: 1/1/2016 7:15:00 PM
A very nice acrostic, Rhoda. Well done.
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Date: 1/1/2016 4:26:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Rhoda:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/1/2016 4:17:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest.
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