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Marshmallow clouds
Drifting past my windows
I dream of the sun

14th May 2015

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James Fraser

Date: 5/29/2015 4:57:00 PM

No better sky than the one in your image Jan. it simply wants you to smile, and smile widely, hugs, James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 5/29/2015 5:16:00 PM

Thanks James for commenting and all your support James I do appreciate it: - ) The scene was just as I described then 10 minutes later the clouds were gone and I saw that rare event - sunshine!Hugs Jan xx

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 5/21/2015 3:03:00 AM

Called in to read your poetry Jan. Always captivated by haiku. Beautiful 'Blue Sky Thinking' sets the tone for summer sun~Delice

Jan Allison
Date: 5/21/2015 6:37:00 AM

OH I hope summer arrives here soon Delice - it is sunny but oh so cold:-( Hugs Jan xx

David Meade

Date: 5/15/2015 11:54:00 PM

Your haiku reminded me of a John Denver's song "Sunshine on My Shoulders" You have brighten my day. Big hugs! 7

Jan Allison
Date: 5/16/2015 1:42:00 AM

aww thanks so much David:-) hugs jan xx

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/15/2015 9:39:00 PM

When I was a kid, I liked to lay on the grass and just watch the clouds go by. My Mom would say they looked liked mashed potatoes :) ... I really enjoyed your lovely poem, Jan. Very nicely penned!

Jan Allison
Date: 5/16/2015 1:42:00 AM

Oh that is so accurate a description Kelly! hugs Jan xx

Christina Hons

Date: 5/15/2015 7:49:00 PM

Simple in verse but such a lovely picture painted in my mind. I too look at the sky often.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/16/2015 1:41:00 AM

Thanks Christina for dropping by with your comment:-) hugs Jan xx

Sneha Rv

Date: 5/15/2015 9:19:00 AM

How pretty!! :D :D

Jan Allison
Date: 5/15/2015 11:25:00 AM

Thanks so much Sneha:-) Hugs Jan xx

MD Johnson

Date: 5/15/2015 8:27:00 AM

This transported back to my boyhood when I was poolside waiting, not too long, for the fluffy mass to pass so I could soak up the warmth. Enjoyed very much.

Jan Allison
Date: 5/15/2015 11:24:00 AM

Thanks so much Michael:-) Hugs Jan xx