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Marshmallow clouds Drifting past my windows I dream of the sun 14th May 2015

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Date: 5/29/2015 4:57:00 PM
No better sky than the one in your image Jan. it simply wants you to smile, and smile widely, hugs, James xx
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Date: 5/29/2015 5:16:00 PM
Thanks James for commenting and all your support James I do appreciate it: - ) The scene was just as I described then 10 minutes later the clouds were gone and I saw that rare event - sunshine!Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/21/2015 3:03:00 AM
Called in to read your poetry Jan. Always captivated by haiku. Beautiful 'Blue Sky Thinking' sets the tone for summer sun~Delice
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Date: 5/21/2015 6:37:00 AM
OH I hope summer arrives here soon Delice - it is sunny but oh so cold:-( Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/15/2015 11:54:00 PM
Your haiku reminded me of a John Denver's song "Sunshine on My Shoulders" You have brighten my day. Big hugs! 7
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Date: 5/16/2015 1:42:00 AM
aww thanks so much David:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 5/15/2015 9:39:00 PM
When I was a kid, I liked to lay on the grass and just watch the clouds go by. My Mom would say they looked liked mashed potatoes :) ... I really enjoyed your lovely poem, Jan. Very nicely penned!
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Date: 5/16/2015 1:42:00 AM
Oh that is so accurate a description Kelly! hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/15/2015 7:49:00 PM
Simple in verse but such a lovely picture painted in my mind. I too look at the sky often.
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Date: 5/16/2015 1:41:00 AM
Thanks Christina for dropping by with your comment:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/15/2015 9:19:00 AM
How pretty!! :D :D
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Date: 5/15/2015 11:25:00 AM
Thanks so much Sneha:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/15/2015 8:27:00 AM
This transported back to my boyhood when I was poolside waiting, not too long, for the fluffy mass to pass so I could soak up the warmth. Enjoyed very much.
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Date: 5/15/2015 11:24:00 AM
Thanks so much Michael:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/14/2015 10:11:00 PM
Delightful....first time hearing....Marshmallow Clouds....Unique A Thon.....
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Date: 5/15/2015 1:40:00 AM
Thanks so much Judy - its amazing what springs to mind when you see the clouds:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/14/2015 4:37:00 PM
terrific 'ku, jan... loved the 'aha' moment.. huggs
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Date: 5/14/2015 5:26:00 PM
Thanks so much Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/14/2015 4:31:00 PM
Jan, so soothing and calming, lovely 7, and thanks for visiting my wild and untamed poem
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Date: 5/14/2015 5:25:00 PM
Thanks so much for dropping by and commenting:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/14/2015 3:54:00 PM
Yes, this is more like how a haiku should be, Jan. You have caught the vision!! Love that last line!!
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Date: 5/14/2015 5:25:00 PM
Thanks Andrea - a bit of 'blue sky thinking' and i am on the right path lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 5/14/2015 11:54:00 AM
Beautiful thinking to Marshmallow clouds in the sky. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 5/14/2015 1:55:00 PM
Thanks so much BL:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/14/2015 9:25:00 AM
Great Haiku Jan, Love those Marshmallow Clouds Best Wishes Kevin
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Date: 5/14/2015 9:30:00 AM
Thanks Kevin I think it is a good way to describe them - and i love marshmallows lol:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/14/2015 7:52:00 AM
Sounds like a lovely day.
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Date: 5/14/2015 9:29:00 AM
The clouds have cleared and it is sunny now - it wasn't when I wrote the poem:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 5/14/2015 7:34:00 AM
What a haiku treat. I can picture spongy marshmallow clouds. Delightful....7
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Date: 5/14/2015 7:38:00 AM
Thanks Nandita - I have posted a fun poem too - I know you like my humourous writes too:-) Hugs Jan xx