Blue Sky Blues

four walls are my cage i need to see more blue skies and look in your eyes

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/21/2020 11:55:00 AM

Perfect sneryu penning, John. Love the thought. Time to break out of the cage(s)! Here's to blue skies for 2021! Tidings of Joy, Gershon

Paul Callus

Date: 12/20/2020 2:14:00 AM

We're all dying to be set free again from from all these restrictions...like blue skies, hope will see us through. I also feel a romantic touch...a longing for a loved one, being kept apart cos of present circumstances. . Wishing you a merry & blessed Christmas. // paul

John Watt
Date: 12/20/2020 2:00:00 PM

Yes, you read that well, Paul. The two-pronged longing for outdoor activity and social closeness. Thank you for the visit, kind sir. ~ John

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/19/2020 6:14:00 PM

this is really nice, John. Quite lovely.

John Watt
Date: 12/20/2020 2:00:00 PM

I'm glad you think so, thanks for stopping by ~ John

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/19/2020 9:52:00 AM

Hi John, Many feel like this due to Covid and not being able to see loved ones. You expressed that very well in this well-written write:-) Alexis

John Watt
Date: 12/20/2020 2:00:00 PM

Thank you for your lovely comment, Alexis. Enjoy your day ~ John

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 12/18/2020 10:39:00 PM

I really like the contrasting imagery in your title - blue skies can be about longing as well as happiness - makes me think of the sky as two large blue eyes!

John Watt
Date: 12/18/2020 10:57:00 PM

Once again you get me, dear friend. Thank you for understanding (and for leaving lovely comments) ~ John