Blue Skies of Dakota

I cannot write of white sandy beaches
For I am an inland raised girl 
Who lived under the blue sky of Dakota.
I guess I’ll give “the sky” a whirl.

If I had lived by one of the oceans
Then I would have written of it.
But I choose to honor bright skies of blue,
Getting bluer the longer I sit.

We had greyest of cold skies in winter.
Sometimes they were white, full of snow.
But endless expanse of blue summer skies
Put on a magnificent show.

Without blanket of smog to pollute it
The sky was a clear, azure blue, 
It was just right for summertime dreaming,
To recall in winter time too.

It’s been many years since as a youngster
I dreamed under vivid blue sky.
Until gazing brought on a hunger for
A slice of Mom’s blue-berry pie.

When I am tired of smoke-yellowed heavens,
And I long for skies I once knew,
I pack up my tent to go back where I spent
My youth under bluest of blue.



Written for contest "Blue on  blue on blue."  My subject "The Sky" Won no. 2

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/5/2011 5:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Joyce in Francine's "Blue on blue on blue" contest. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/2/2011 11:46:00 AM
Dear Joyce, it must have been grand growing up in the Dakotas and seeing seeing skies so blue. Your description is mesmerizing, dear. Felt like I was there with you. Growing up in NJ, the skies were not so blue -- filled with pollution from oil refineries and factories. Delighted to congratulate you on another win today, dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/2/2011 2:06:00 AM
soo sreamy, joyce.. KUDOS to you for superb win with huggs! :)
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Date: 7/1/2011 10:31:00 PM
loved it Joyce.....used to live not far from Minot N D and know this sky and the skies of Manitoba and Saskatchewan very well.....congrats and thanks for the reminder of happy times......Syd
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Date: 7/1/2011 8:23:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your second place win in the sky portion of the contest with another beautiful wow wonder my friend..luv..
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Date: 7/1/2011 6:56:00 PM
Congratulations, Joyce, I am glad to see this one I liked so well get a number placement!
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Date: 7/1/2011 4:39:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce on your 2nd place win in Francines contest with this beautiful poem of the sky~~
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Date: 7/1/2011 4:11:00 PM
just a lovely piece Joyce, congrats on your 2nd place win in the "sky" portion of the contest
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Date: 6/30/2011 10:15:00 PM
A nice sentimental one Joyce. I thought that was quite clever how seeing the bue sky made you long for blueberry pie!!
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Date: 6/30/2011 3:05:00 PM
OH! and best wishes, i see its for a contest..
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Date: 6/30/2011 3:03:00 PM
Enjoyed and i was smitten Joyce..by this piece you have skywritten.. may i call you that..? (Joyce i mean) And don't mind me its just (my way)..now wasen't there a song...like that.?..oh now where was i? yes enjoyed this great blue happy write & thank you..indeed!
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Date: 6/29/2011 5:53:00 PM
very creative and heart felt good luck in the contest .cory
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Date: 6/29/2011 12:37:00 PM
Nice recollections of the past memories, Joyce
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Date: 6/29/2011 12:18:00 PM
The best to you in the contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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