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in the dead of night i lay awake with thoughts of you of us outside my window a sullen moon stands still i lay awake and wonder i dare not stir my fears holding my breath all but a shiver in the silence of the dark in the dead of night i hold on gently to thoughts of you of us AP: 3rd place 2020 Submitted on May 21, 2020 for contest BRIAN'S CHOICE P sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on November 15, 2019

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Date: 5/22/2020 9:26:00 PM
Fears come close to those we love. Beautiful Line
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Date: 5/22/2020 10:27:00 PM
Thank you, Lonna.
Date: 11/18/2019 2:45:00 PM
This one has a mystical friendliness about it.
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Date: 11/18/2019 3:32:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.
Date: 11/17/2019 12:20:00 PM
This somber, touching poem has such beautiful imagery.
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Date: 11/18/2019 3:32:00 PM
Thanks, Evelyn. Most appreciated.
Date: 11/16/2019 6:01:00 AM
lovely poem..
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Date: 11/16/2019 8:50:00 AM
Thanks, SO. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/15/2019 11:10:00 PM
Nice. Bless you, Gina
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Date: 11/15/2019 11:38:00 PM
Thanks, Gina. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/15/2019 9:59:00 PM
Hi Line this was a nice solemn poem. Thanks for sharing
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Date: 11/15/2019 11:38:00 PM
Thanks, Gregory. Much appreciated.
Date: 11/15/2019 9:03:00 PM
Beautiful Line....so simple but so deep... :) hugs
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Date: 11/15/2019 11:41:00 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sandra.

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