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Blue Jean - Tight Thing - You Look Good Girl

There once was a girl who fell to the ground with a mighty rumble and frightening sound for the jeans that she wore fit when she lay on the floor for her rear asset had become quite round ~ There once was a girl who asked her friend "do I look to fat in my legs and back end" "of course you don't," he said a sweet slice of buttered bread for those tasty 501's I'd befriend ____________________________________ Two separate Limericks A Nette Onclaud Contest "Its in the Jeans" Poet ~ Rick Parise

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Date: 6/16/2011 5:39:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this creative entry...Sara
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Date: 6/15/2011 6:06:00 PM
custom fitting poem and well taylored work Rick! : )
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Date: 6/15/2011 4:42:00 PM
Congratulations with your win here dear poet, on a very good Limerick ! Awesome write sir ! Have a wonderful week my friend ! much love, james
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Date: 6/15/2011 1:30:00 PM
My Congratulations to you Rick on your win in Nette's contest..gautami
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Date: 6/15/2011 10:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Jeans" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/15/2011 10:12:00 AM
Dear Rick, so happy for your success in the contest. Congratulations. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/15/2011 6:43:00 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of nette, Rick
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Date: 6/15/2011 6:31:00 AM
hmmmm I have seen teens do that LOL lay on the floor to pull them up, if they only new how much trouble they could get themselves in. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/15/2011 6:31:00 AM
hmmmm I have seen teens do that LOL lay on the floor to pull them up, if they only new how much trouble they could get themselves in. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/15/2011 1:37:00 AM
many Congrats on your big win in nette's contest.cheers
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Date: 6/15/2011 12:32:00 AM
Very nice Limericks here Rick...Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/14/2011 9:51:00 PM
HI, Rick. Enjoyed your limericks here. Congratulations in this contest! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 6/14/2011 8:42:00 PM
Congrats Rick on your super win in the jeans contest with this perfect entry my friend..and thankxx for my high placement in STONES with ABBA.. appreciate luv.. not blogging these days ..
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Date: 6/14/2011 10:46:00 AM
LOL Love the way her butt flattens out when lying down in the first limerick, Rick, and I laughed out loud reading the second one. No one will tell the truth if you ask if you look fat. "A sweet slice of buttered bread" sounds much kinder. Best wishes in the contest! BTW, I think I'm the firt to comment because there have been technical problems on the Soup again today. Love, Carolyn
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